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You win, I lose

My mind is spinning
my heart is broken
in a million pieces
it seems.

She played her game
was hoping she'd lose
but instead they believe her
and I sit here crying.

I tried so hard
to be a good friend
to be there for him
til the end.

But she made him think
I was to blame
for all her little
bullshit games.

In the end
I lose out
my name is shattered
and my heart scattered about.

I hope he will see
before it's too late
that she is playing a game
his heart will not be able to take.

*New note, him and I are ok.*

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I am giving up.  She wins.  I hope there broken hearts from her will mend!
Written May 15th, 2003

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  • bird-mad girl
    January 21, 2005
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    I just stopped being friends with my using ex best friend. She lied to me all the time and dose it with others. Still, nobody sees the lies behind her words. I'm just hoping that one day, they will see.
    This was really good. And I could really relate to it. Keep up the good work!

    Always and Forever,
    ~Kendal


  • May 16, 2003
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    Good but Sad

    Just remember what comes around goes around, I hate seeing people hurt, especially friends, and as far as me, well, the battles lost but then again who cares about battles, its the war you want to win. I would dwell on it...Keep your head up, lifes to short.

    Nice words sweety...


  • Johnny Wheeler
    May 15, 2003
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    Pain

    Hi
    I am so very sorry. This tugs at my heart. Your words grab my soul. I empathize with you. I am at a loss for words, for no words I can say will ease your pain Thank you for sharing this write with me.
    ~Johnny