I want to lay you down
In a field of flowers
Watch you breath in
All the scents around you
Watch you as you gleam
A smile that only you can
Brighter then the sun above
And you move me
Like no other can
And you touch me
You make my heart warm
I still see you
Even when my eyes are closed
You are the one you are the one
I want to lay you down
On grandma's feather bed
Watch you giggle
As I tickle your toes
And As you sink in
I know I've found an Angel
Boy am I a lucky Man
And you move me
Like no other can
And you touch me
You make my heart warm
I still see you
Even when my eyes are closed
You are the one you are the one
I want to lay you down
Love you like no other
Hold you so close
That we become as one
My Lady, my lover
Your my friend my evermore
Boy am I a lucky man
Chorus
Chorus
Author notes
Option One
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A contest entry
- WICKED options for RENT by TheStupidLamb.
750 points, ended December 12, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that's a really sweet write. that's for the comment BTW
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wow !
ooh this is very lovely,i wish i was the one getting laid down on that big old feather bed
but i think i would like a little more than my toes tickled .. ha ha ha
great write my friend ,good luck in the contest
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A beautifully romantic poem that flows softly and evenly! This had me captivated. Really wonderful. All the best in the contest!
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hummm..did you hear music when you wrote this? I could hear a Conway Twitty-like tune!! I'ts very pretty and sensual. Great job my friend!!! GBY
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is it hot in here?
wow! talk about heating up! charlie, you out did yourself! this is so romantic, so warm and tender. i just love this. keep on writing friend. God bless you
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This is wonderful. Your song flows with a flawless rhythm. Your song filled with beautiful and vivid imagery. Well done. I really enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.
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Very sweet, indeed. I could almost hear you singing. lol. Great write and good luck in the contest.
Black Ink -
Superb
Charlie this is just breath taking. The kind of lyrics to melt a girl's heart. I loved it! I can just he a sweet voice of love singing it now!!! Best wishes in the contest. Reads like gold to me!!
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