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Seven Days in paradise

Loneliness around me pulls me ,

Emptyness swallows me ,

Dreams pushes me ,

To drown in a new love

That washes, and purifies me

And I prove to the whole world

Iam still a child ,

that dreams play with ;

Was it heart awakening ?

or was it a mid summer night,s dream ?
[When my toes touched Pharos sand

I felt coming out of a world, I lived in for ages ,

To enter a new dreamy world ;


Seven days ,I lived in Paradise ,

Seven days where ,time stopped

To leave me live in a sweet dream ;

But Are seven days enough to fall in love ?

Are they enough to change my life directions?

The sea in the island with mountains and palms scattered Was enchanting

Was joseph part of this magical world ?

as if he came from his country , especialy to meet me ,

To write together ,

The most beautiful Love Story


In few Days I forgot a lifetime

,Days that time stopped ,

to let me drink, a taste of Paradise

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  • Pari Ali
    March 3, 2008

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    this is the most beautiful love poem I have read mona. simply lovely and I enjoyed the reference to Joseph


    • mona
      March 3, 2008
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      Thanks Pari ,glad ya liked it
      regards


  • mtpoet
    January 11, 2007
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    The questions provoke me as good ones must...


    • mona
      May 27, 2007
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      yes Rudy the questions leaves us thinking of the answer
      regards


  • Jersene gold member
    January 7, 2007

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    Beautiful...and so many questions to ponder...so much I like about this; the imagery, the revelations, the questions...stunning write!

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