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Refreshed(Senyru)

slow walk on the beach
gentle waves caress my feet
cool breeze clears my head.

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Written May 15th, 2003

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  • Lurie
    May 16, 2003
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    OH I wanna walk on the beach!!!!
    Sounds so wonderful and I live so far away from the beach!
    REALLY nice write Bill! ~Laura


  • Sherry gold member
    May 15, 2003
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    A wonderful refreshed piece this is enjoyed....Hugs,Sherry