I am a Christmas tree
Decorated and lit for Christmas day
With lots of presents under me
I am a Christmas tree
Soon will hear the children's glee
As with their new toys they play
I am a Christmas tree
Decorated and lit for Christmas day
In a list
A contest entry
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300 points, ended December 25, 2006, 13 entries
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Honorable mention
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very nice poem. thank you for wntering and good luck in my contest.
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I really appreciate the talent of those who write form and rhymning poetry. I intend to attempt writing triolet of my own in the future.
This is a simple piece yet very real and the content pictures out a christmas tree with beatiful lights and presents undernetath which the children would be excited and happy to open... that's where the fun goes.
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Thank-you very much for the entry, wonderful to see so many poets writing rhyming poetry. Please try again in the remaining rounds.
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Simplistic ...
but it's a nice poem. It's a bit shorter than I'd have liked, but it works and that's the main thing.
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Oh Christmas tree, Oh christmas tree
How dear the presents under thee
I wish I may, I wish I might
Get all the things I want this night
The children gather up their toys
Soon will ring their cries of joy
So christmas tree, oh christmas tree
You make each christmas so happy!
Ahh, so wonderful and so true
There's no christmas without you!!
And Billbard, you've got it right!
This triolet is really tight!
I know you will do really well
In this contest...I can tell!!!
Much love, Dari xxx
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this is really cute
Great job!
Much luv,
RB -
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tahe how adorable! =] -
this is cute; I always enjoy your spirited little takes on the contests. They are very refreshing.
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this is a very interesting poem. it must be quite hard to write from a tree's point of view! lol!
not really my sort of poem, but sitll very good!
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