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Season greetings

Snowdrops fall outside the window
Children laugh and play
The sure signs the Santa Claus
Is surely on his way

Choirs sing out in the streets
To mark the joyous day
And to also celebratre Jesus Christ
Who was born upon this day

The Turkey smells so wonderful
The pudding smells great too
The lights and presents round the tree
Making dreams come true

And now it the season
Where feelings are made clear
Theres only one thing left to say
Merry Christmas and happy new year


Author notes

This is a christmas poem to try and get people in the mood for christmas, so please, if youre gonna put a downer on the feeling of christmas, dont bother. However, critiques are still welcome.
Christmas is very near

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  • dream5111
    January 21, 2007

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    "The Turkey smells so wonderful
    The pudding smells great too
    The lights and presents round the tree
    Making dreams come true" is my favorite part i've always loved the holidays great write


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 14, 2006

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    THIS IS SO SWEET!

    A sincere and wonderful Christmas wish for us all, the love we show for family and friends at Christmas should be given year round. Merry Christmas to you my friend.


    • 1-Winged-Angel
      December 17, 2006
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      Merry christmas to you aswell . Thanks for reading.

      • Puppydog gold member
        December 18, 2006
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        DEAR MELISSA

        As I sit and thought of all the wonderful people that I have met here on AP these feelings and thoughts of this Christmas I wanted to share with all of you. You and my other friends are so wonderful and I am so thankful for having you as my friends. Merry Christmas *santa*

      • Puppydog gold member
        December 18, 2006
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        DEAR KELLY

        You are always sincerely welcome my friend, it is so nice to read friends sincere thoughts this time of year. MERRY CHRISTMAS *santa*


  • koaru kamiya
    December 5, 2006
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    Merry Christmas to you to


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 3, 2006

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    your house has pudding can i visit, i'll be good, at least until you run out of pudding, lol, you did a great job on this i loved it and it got me all ready for christmas, keep it flowing


    • 1-Winged-Angel
      December 5, 2006
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      lol. Well you can have my share of pudding. I'm not a big fan. Thanks for commenting. I really appreciate it

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