Together Dreams

I dare to dream
So I can see
What tomorrow will bring
What will I be
But,whatever I'm
To wherever I ll be
There will be a dream
So we can see
We got to believe
To surely feel
No chances to leave
With one strong will
So come lets see
Together let it seem
The dawn for you and me
Come lets dream

-Sunny

Author notes

"There is a dream in every one of us yet to see -sunny"

A contest entry

Pleasure and Pain by Shadow Cat 1990. 500 points, ended December 26, 2006, 48 entries
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honey bear
January 5, 2007

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beautifull
your loving heart always shines though your writes my friend i am proud to call you SON good luck in the contest with this very wonderfull write
The.poet.of.hearts
January 4, 2007

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yeh dreams can tell us alot
but depend on us how much we believe on itt
well wonderfull
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
Amunet Wolfbane
December 26, 2006
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Best of luck to you in the contest
Summer Dawn
December 22, 2006

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very nice at trying to keep the reader going in different directions with the way it was written, but your points make alot of sense. nice poem again.
- sunnystar
  December 22, 2006
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  Thank you
  so much windy this iis a poem with a dedication to our dreams...
Poetic Aphrodite
December 5, 2006
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And may all your dreams come true, lovely write, Bella.
Disturbed Prodigy
December 3, 2006

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you are one of a kind, and i wouldn't trade you for another friend in the word, this is a great poem, i think you hit it on the the nail here, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest