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Jesus Is

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JESUS IS...

He teaches me to bear my soul
He is righteous through and through
Jesus, the one who makes me whole
His powers make me feel brand new

Baby wrapped in swaddling cloth
The chosen one to become King
His love teaches to still my wroth
He helps me fly on broken wing

This simple man He wandered far
Taught the sinners of Godliness
He breaks chains that bind and mar
freeed me from life's evilness

Jesus is my Lord and Savior
through Him I have found salvation
Compass for moral behavior
So worthy of adoration

His walk on earth ended in pain
Impaled upon the cross was He.
This man was mocked with disdain
He absolved my sins, set them free

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Live in such a way that God's love can bless you as you wait for the eternal life that our Lord Jesus Christ in His mercy is going to give you. Jude 1:21

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  • Candy6
    June 6, 2007

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    very well written

    very well written. it rhymes and flows well. I am so glad I know Jesus Christ, and lives in me, also. Sandy, I really like this poem.


  • CurtimusMaximus
    December 8, 2006

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    Excellent Work!

    ExcellentWork! Very focused piece aptly answering my contest question. Thank you. You mixed well the issue of who Jesus is AND who He is to you. It would be interesting to see the response of someone who did not know Jesus when you wrote the final stanza, and specifically the "His walk on earth ended in pain, impaled upon the cross was He". Why would such a "simple man" teaching godliness be crucified? Also, how beautiful it would be to include a stanza on His resurrection, truly setting Him apart as He is revealed in the Word, and demonstrating the effectiveness of His work on the cross. Very well written


  • TallDrinkofWater
    December 4, 2006

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    Beautiful

    You love for God shines through in this poem Sandy, God is smiling and you place in heaven is insured. Way to go Write on Poet


  • Scarzat
    December 3, 2006

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    Hi!

    Sandy!

    Now days, good people like you are rare to find.

    We, human beings pound away at the Jesus teachings, then put all in handcuffs.
    Jesus was the greatest and He will always be.
    When we face ourselves with the evidence, we refuse to acknowledge the existence of ourselves.
    We never understand the Divine Power that makes us communicate with each other
    Do we ask ourselves where our voice comes from? One day, this receptacle will lie down there without life.

    We only live in prescribed terms.

    Well done!

    Love it!

    Nice written!

    Take care!





    • Sandygram silver member
      December 3, 2006
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      AMAZING COMMENT MY FRIEND!!!

      Oh My Scarzat, You leave the most lovely comment. Thank you so much. My faith grows stronger each day. I only accepted Him 2 years ago in my heart so I still have so much to learn. Since then I have been blessed to meet many wonderful people such as you. You take care and many Blessings to you. Sandy


  • individuality gold member
    December 3, 2006

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    a smiling spiritual piece here, though i am not a christian i do think of religion often. i wish that you have good luck in this contest you have entered. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

    • Sandygram silver member
      December 3, 2006
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      WONDERFUL COMMENT MY FRIEND

      Hi there, So nice to hear from you. So glad you enjoyed. You take care, Sandy


  • mzladyt
    December 3, 2006

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    very good

    I love this poem. It shows the trust and the love you have for our Jesus. The flow is great and it is so easy to read and take in.


    • Sandygram silver member
      December 3, 2006
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      WONDERFUL COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!

      Thank you for reading my poem and leaving a lovely comment. I appreciate it!! You take care, Sandy


  • Frozentearz
    December 2, 2006

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    I have to say this is simply stunning, beautiful,
    and so well worded, I read it twice
    some beautiful meaning written into this, Fro Jesus is all of this,
    This is a winner in my eyes.
    Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkk yoouuuuuuuuuuuuuu
    for sharing your talent once again.
    Warm hugz
    Frozentearz


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 2, 2006

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    Beautifully awesome

    Sandy,
    You just don't know how deeply this poem touched my heart and soul this day!
    If ever I NEEDED to read soemthing of this caliber, it has been this day
    Thank you for being an instrument of our Heavenly Father; this is just awesome!
    I wish you all the best in the contest, my sweet friend!

  • June-bug
    December 2, 2006

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    excellent

    Beautiful write and yet another wonderful testiment of your faith. This is just so wonderful. I love the graphic, and border. The graphic reminds me of getting saved and becoming a child again. A child in faith. I know I am forever learning more of his precious love and the blessing he will bestow as I turn my life to him completely. God Bless you, and thanks for posting this so many may have the opportunity to read and be touched by your beautiful words.


  • Child of an Angel
    December 2, 2006
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    Breath Taking

    Wonderful Job of Depicting JKesus Christ and his life and meaning and hopes....Wonderful. Everything was extremely great, wording Rhyme, tempo...Thank you for writing this and giving myself the chance tor ead it. Keep penning!!

    Emily

  • femurlee
    December 2, 2006

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    Wonderful

    You have said the truth about a great being. I can tell that your sentiments towards Him are genuine in your careful display of rhyme and metaphor. Good luck in the contest. Peace.


  • Talking Toni gold member
    December 2, 2006

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    AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was beautiful and I'm sure you blessed Jesus's heart with your words of love for him!!! You described his beginning with accuracy as well as his walk throughout his life. You leave the reader knowing you have an steadfast walk with Christ and the love you feel for him shines through with your choice of words. The imagery was so vivid I could see him in the manger and through all his traveling teaching others of his father's amazing love and grace!!! Well done and good luck in this contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Toni


  • AALouisiana
    December 2, 2006

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    excellent

    You've described Jesus Christ wonderfully. "And every knee shall bow and every tongue confess that Jesus Christ is Lord..." Phillipians 2:10-11 And one day indeed every knee shall bow and every tongue shall confess that Jesus Christ is Lord!

    The picture of Jesus with the child on His lap goes well with your text. I hope you win the gold for this one.


  • Cannonsfire
    December 2, 2006

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    A very well penned spiritual poem, fine phrasing and rhyme and flow. Lovely sentiments about a man so many words are written about, you have told the story well.

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