me and my cup of coffee
it's there for me every morning
filling my lonliness
sharing my thoughts
giving me new planes
it's the friend I know I will never loose
a different flavour everyday
from which I can choose
my coffee is always there for me
sharing every sheded tear
clearing my thoughts,my cup of coffee
A contest entry
- treasure chest for quickie prewrites by DancingRed.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Send some of that coffee my way
Sounds so appetizing. The coffee that you drink is much better then the coffee that I do.
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Blearrrh. I'm not a coffee fan myself, but I think I can relate to you 'cause I have my tea.
Great poem, but perhaps the last line needs as extra space after the comma.
Thanks for entering.
DancingRed.
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this is a really origional, well written poem. it flows very well, and i like the ideas inside it. keep up the great work!
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Hi!
There!
This is the really thing
I like the idea
So great!
Jazm! I appreciate what you intend to write
I understand how it feels
But.....That was a nice piece of work
Keep it on!
Take care!
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