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Perplexed

Beauty swims
Through shards of glass
And is left lying upon bloody hope.
Screaming in shrills,
Try to cast its way out
But in endless cries, we realize
Our mistakes only begin to add up.
Distant memories
Creep in the mind
Accusing against the innocent
And tainted morality
Bleeds crimson tales
As beauty becomes a shadow
A mere glimpse of happiness
Lingers and taunts the non-existant.
They attempt at an exit
But are left in their own sufferings
As the door slams infront of them
Assuring them that they will rot
Never again will they bet set free
Because the non-existant has no beauty
They have nothing but shame that consumes them.
It eats away their cold hearts
That now are blazed in fire
It ceases beating
Due to the fact they have been eternally damned.


The innocent lye alone,
But the non-existant end up in hell,
So they can burn together forever more.


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im non-existant, not innocent.

I dont care what you think, but ur welcome to share anyways :)

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  • Extreme Princess
    December 16, 2006
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    I really dont know what to say about this poem all i can say is that there were a few parts in there that just blew my mind and other parts that confused but over all i really liked it i really hope you can see that you are a good writer...much love to you Tabby


  • horrorfanatic
    December 6, 2006

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    i like the last 3 lines they sound pretty cool theres some words that need to be fixed but over all i think that this is a really good poem. even though you dont think that youre a good writer i do i like reading your poems.
    I LOVE YOU!!