Blue eyed fae
what do you see
you look so longingly
into the mist
what is that you wish
I wish to fly away
on the wings of a butterfly
to just for a moment leave this world behind
Its a lonely exsistence to be
So please do not envy me.
But beautiful fae why would
you want to run away
it is a wonderful carefree life you have
What has made it so bad
Living with out love has made
it unbearable
Not having someone is terrible
You do not know my pain
Your life is so full of gains.
Blue eyed fae
I am so sorry
I wish you could find the love
you wish.
I have but alas I can't keep it
For time will steel it away.
The weather will wear it
and my joy will have its date.
A contest entry
- I'm leaving... by Aeonna.
450 points, ended February 16, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Cool~
Oh cool! I really enjoyed reading this poem! Where'd you get the idea for this poem, and how old are you? Your a great poet and thanks so much for entering my contest! Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest
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I like the idea behind this. What picture are you writing about? The rhyme seems slightly stressed.
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i am writing about the 6th picture the one of the Faery looking over her shoulder with the butterfly on her hand. I am glad you like the idea behind it and yeah it is slightly stressed I am sorry about that didn't mean it to come out that way. Thanks for commenting and I am glad that you liked it.
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