What makes us think it had a beginning,
or for that matter,will have an end?
Maybe the universe was always eternal,
is the God on which we all so depend.
Just because the life we're living had a start,
we assume it separate, a thing apart.
Yet I see all life and all things as one,
never ending, will never be done.
He Said,"I am the Alpha & Omega essence".
We're all part of the sum total effervescent.
Returning to life time after time immortal,
repairing mistakes through varied portals.
Everything that exists, right down to the air,
things we can see, others hidden are shared.
We're a minute speck ,a drip in the great sea.
yet part of the complexness of eternity.
~~Suseann~~
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A contest entry
- Origins of the Universe by aslanlight.
300 points, ended December 17, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Brilliance and Wisdom!
Dearest Suseann
God is a whispering to you
Your song is magnificent.
I love the presentation right down to the message
You are glorifying the eternity within all of us.
As infinite and timeless as the grains of sands upon eternity’s shore.
Namaste Blessed Be Forevermore, True Gold, Sharon.
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WOW! Magnificent!!!! This is so beautiful and you have done it flawlessly. The poem makes perfect sense, has great rhyme and flow and an excellent choice of words. Each quatrain is complete in itself and is written so well that you have the reader's total attention from start to end
I just LOVE the first two lines. You say it all in those few words.
All the best,
Charishma
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Very good composition and much thought went into it. A very readable poem and one that would inspire the reader to delve into this subject more. Blesings, Lora
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forgot to applaud
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excellent...great flow and imagery...the first stanza is great...I never looked at it that way...well done,thanks
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BEAUTIFUL AND INSPIRING!
So uplifting and a wonderful inspiration Suseann. A most caring and wonderful poem.
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I also hold this same opinion about the creation of the universe. Very well stated. My best in the contest, ♥ Belle
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Wonderful Write
This is a wonderful write Suseann! I like the feel of the poem, making the reader think about their own beliefs, and challenge yours. It is amazing, and I look at it like this, the earth is round, DNA strands go into an unending spiral...Nothing will ever end. Life will always go on, even if we blow ourselves up in nuclear war on this earth...God has a plan that is far more of a bigger picture than what we could imagine! GREAT POEM! LOVE IT!
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You are right on in the way I view life."Nova" had a episode covering string theory that made things tie together in what I subconsciencly already knew.I think on some level.We all know God and the answers we seek.May never know the story complete and all at once,because it's far to powerful for a us as indiviguals /not collectively/to comprehind.That DNA strand runs through absolutly everything in the universe. When evil intent transgresses against anything or anyone.It's doing self harm.Because we are one in all aspects.I believe Gods words are taken unintentionally in most cases,out of context.The enlightenment of his work take an open mind and love.But then,he told us that.
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totally awesome
Your truths are my truths, sister. Ho wcan we know or say for sure,other than that soul has spoken to us.
This is beautifully done, sweetly said and soulfully meant.
You and I can know and it is for others to have their own knowing...but int he end...we shall return again and again through the osmosis of eternity.
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Finalists list
Sorry I added you to the finalist list and I shouldn't have as the contests only just started. It's the first contest I've run since everything changed and just getting to know what to do. Your poems so good though I expect it wouldn't have ended up in the list anyway. -
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It's ok. I myself have been avoiding the start of a contest out of fear,I'll not get it and make people upset without intending to.Ha! Anything you do in here is fine with me.Your braver than me aslanlight.~~Suseann
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Out of this world!
Brilliant and profound; I expected some deep and imaginitive entries for this contest and you certainly havn't disappointed me. In fact this is a fantastic first entry, full of thought and intelligence.
We are in and part of eternity now and you fully understand this. Well done!
Georgia
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