When as a single cell I did divide, He was there.
When first I moved within the womb, He was there.
When first I see the bright light,
wailing with delight, upon my mothers breast,
tasting the gift of life, He was there.
As I began, first steps, unsteady,
my first fall, He was there to pick me up,
set me on the route to his great hall.
Through the years, many stumbles and falls,
straying away from him and back again,
He cried and rejoiced always there.
When my seed provided the spark for new life,
He was there as my child did divide.
When tragedy entered unto me,
wailing in grief, inconsolable, needing to believe,
He was there.
Throughout my days, He is my way.
When last I close my eyes, He will be there
to take me where all souls gather,
to introduce me to the Father.
He is Jesus.
He is always there.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow.. great message. So inspiring, I loved this poem.
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Most inspiring, and attesting to God's faithfulness all through our lives...I wish you the best in the contest friend...
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Amen! So beautiful, He is and always will be and your write depticts that. Blessings.
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AMEN , yes He Is
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This reminded me of when Jesus walked the earth and how wonderful it must have been to be there and experience his healing powers and his deep, deep love...thank you for the reminder and the entry. I know Rae and Christian will appreciate it.
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Great job!
This was wonderful to read!
I'm sure a lot of us can relate to this.
Excellent Job on this one!! : )
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So few poems give me such chills, oh if everyone knew such peace or turmoil and peace again! Life is harsh and this should make us feel as if we are being blessed with the ope that he believes we can overcome any obstacle through him. I guess this really spoke to me, beautiful dear, just beautiful I can feel the smiles now. Thanks
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GOOD I LIKED THE FLOW OF THIS GOOD JOB WITH THIS WRITE
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nice
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Definately. Very hopeful and inspiring! Thank you for entering and for contributing this for my friend.
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I don't know what to say..except.>>AMEN.
Peace/mia
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Good Job
Good job with this poem! You have a great way with portraying your feelings through words! Thanks for entering my contest, good job, and good luck! -
The title captured my attention and held it to the end. Thank you very much in reminding me that He is always there. Sometimes we go through rough times and want to take charge, making things worse, yet knowing that only He is the one taking the lead, need I not do anything further but wait on him.
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Very moving. This is such an heartfelt and true piece, I enjoyed reading it very much!
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Wonderful tribute to our Lord and savior Jesus Christ. I enjoyed this poem of truth and heartfelt gratefulness. *angel
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Comforting
This is a good reminder that Jesus is there throughout all of our lives from conception to death. He walks with us through tragedies and rejoices in our triumphs -
TREMENDOUSLY AWESOME!
Well Mac: You've knocked me down again with your awesome masterpiece...You have put out some wonderful works since I joined..At first I thought it was the conception of Jesus...but then I realized it was you, and then your descendents carrying on...ISN'T THAT THE WAY HE IS! FAITHFUL TO THE END!lINE1 What a powerful opener..." When as a cell I did divide.,He was there" Psalm 139!Last stanza" When at last I close my eyes...to take me to the Father, where all souls gather...He is there! Terrific beyond description! -
Woderful! *tear* So true. Beautifully written!
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Terrific
this is just beautiful. Wonderful of how life with Jesus as our Saviour is. Even when we stray he is there to welcome us back again. Thanks for the pleasure of the read and for posting this for all to see.
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Amazing an so very very true. Jesus is and will always be there for everyone. Beautiful poem and good luck in my contest.
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HOW TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is just beautiful!!!!! I'm am sure you blessed God with this amazing write!! He is always there even when it feels as though he is not. He will never leave or forsake us he reveals in his word. There are alot of times when I don't feel his presence but many times I do as well. You took me on your journey with Jesus in each stanza the imagery so vivid, the words so true!! Thanks for writing this and sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Toni
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He Is Always There
This is some good work! You integrate the fact that Jesus is always there, and the relational aspect that He is always there for you. Interesting the "he is always there" theme moving from one generation to another. Thanks for being a part of the contest -
PROFOUNDLY BEAUTIFUL!
I couldn't find the words you have to say what you have..You have done an excellent work here! All the work is strong, not weak! It talks of eternity, predestined to be His creation, He is always there, and here, and everywhere! The Title speaks for Himself...Omnipresent Jesus!The first line..talking about cell division Psalm 139....Your last stanza..is the one to take your home to heaven...The Alpha and Omega...He is there! And all the way between birth and death, He is there, our companion, our redeemer, healer, and so much more...HE IS THERE....wonderful work Mac!
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