With every beat of my heart,
Every breath that I take...
A reminder of this choice I make
From body, soul, and mind so true,
You are my sun, to rise and set,
The dreams I live without regret
A reminder of this choice I make,
For you have tamed the rushing beat,
Embraced in love to feel complete
The dreams I live without regret,
My brightest star and chesrished guide,
Priveledged, I stand by your side
Embraced in love to feel complete,
From body, soul, and mind so true,
With every beat of my heart,
I'm forever loving only you
Author notes
From the given title, Loving Only You.
Sheesh, hard to write love when it's absent from your existence.
Ripples are a form I created, for more info, see
http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2169785
HM
In a list
A contest entry
- I Want You To Write A Love Poem by Ktulu Blackwolfe.
525 points, ended December 16, 2006, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very Good
Very nicely written. I especially liked the last set of words. -
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Thank you for the comment, appreciate it.
Storm
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awesome
perfectly written as always.i truely enjoy every poem you write,thats why you are my favorite.you continue to write,and ill continue to read.awesome job as always.Tisha
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Thank you so much for the comments, truly appreciate it.
Storm
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Beautiful!
Such a breathtaking piece here...so beautiful and precious....a joy to read....good luck in the contest...smiles, Terry -
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Thank you for the comments, so very appreciated.
Storm
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wonderfull
You have written a great poem here, I really enjoyed the rthym and flow, you have captured the feeling of love and penned it well, awesome job, John -
A very beautiful write baby. Has lots of feeling that I can pick up on.
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The first stanza? The first three lines? Simply Awsome!!!!
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Thank you so much for the comments.
Storm
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Great
THis is a wonderfull poem, and so well written, you have the gift, I really enjoyed the flow and the rthym of it and the images it created in my mind, great job, blessings John
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Thanks for reading and commenting hun. So very appreciated.
Storm
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Autumn, this is beautiful. Your words are so full of love and compassion here. And don't give me the garbage about love being absent in your life. You may not have a person there, but you are so full of love and life, that's what matters. And when te time comes right, you are going to get knocked off your feet. Good luck in the contest sweety.
My love to you
Vickie
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Thank you Vickie. I always appreciate your comments hun.
Storm
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Another beautiful effort from the Goddess of Storms. Very deep emotion running through this one. Good luck in the contest! Rhon
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Thanks sweetheart, appreciate your comments.
Storm
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WOW WOW WOW!!! Storm, This is so brilliant, beautiful, and amazing. I am in awe of the perfection of this write. Only a heart as beautiful as yours could have written this. Very impressive. Girl, your talent is beyond words. You continually blow me away. Best of luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Thank you so much Jeannie,your comments are always appreciated.
Storm
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A beautiful and loving write...I like this form of yours as well. Great job and thanks for entering.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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Thanks Ktulu, appreciate your comments and the inspirational title.
Storm
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Absolutely a gorgeous write, my sweet friend!
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Thank you Sandy, appreciate it.
Storm
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it was very good!! good luck in the contest
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Thank you for the comment.
Storm
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Brilliantly done
Again you have used beautiful words to express my feelings, sweet write Autumn, well done!
And yea very hard to write about it when the void is in your heart.
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Thank you Anne. At least I was given a title for inspiration, made it just a tad easier, but not much. Appreciate the comments hun.
Storm
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Amazing
This is a great write you have here, i loved reading it, it really captured my emotions and i found it so beautiful, well done and keep it up, best wishes on the contest.
xxx
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No problem, it was well deserved.
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