A silvery wisp,
of a youthful day.
A silent making-
of honeydew's stay.
Scattered clouds ...
haloed around;
A radiant orb-
over the ground.
Scented wisps......
And solid grounds.
A sheath of care-
the whisper of a shout.
The verdancy below-
its clement touch.
The silent wisp-
a way above.
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this is good... this is really good...
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This is a beautifuly penned picture brings great images to mind
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Thank you
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This is beautiful. It flows together very well, the imagery was absolutely amazing. Thanks you very much for entering this piece into my contest.
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This is beautiful, it has good rhythm and imagery.
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awesome
great poem beautiful imagery...reminds of of Midsummer Night's Dream...thanx for sharing
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wow that's a big compliment.... I loved midsummer night's dreams - one of my favorites...
Thank you for the wonderful comment
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How wonderful.. Your silver ~ gray, blacks & blues paint a most beautiful visualization..
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thank you... for the wonderful words its truly appreciated
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noo
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Oh this is lovely...
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beautiful imagery.... the moon depicted here actually catches our eyes often. Keep writing
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thanks... so much
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