Screams go unheard in macabre night
God’s flame of justice no longer bright
Reborn by thine scythe of impurity
I am the will of Hell’s righteous fury
Tear, sear, rip thine flesh of life
Together corrupt faith to strife
Release me, plague of sin
I am mankind’s darkness within
Slaughter, kill, rape thine heart
Tear thy souls apart
Drink thine whine of blood
Let the rivers of decay slowly flood
To the end of mankind we dine
Upon the flesh of God we find
A contest entry
- Darkness Under Macabre Rule by Cacophony of Chaos.
450 points, ended December 18, 2006, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 1st Contest!! by xox-lankan-xox.
550 points, ended December 17, 2006, 100 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very well written! Thanks so much for entering my contest and good luck! Your a great poet! My favourite lines were "Screams go unheard in macabre night
God’s flame of justice no longer bright
Reborn by thine scythe of impurity
I am the will of Hell’s righteous fury
Tear, sear, rip thine flesh of life
Together corrupt faith to strife
Release me, plague of sin" And good luck! -
WOW
this is so excellent. this me liked much!
I don't have many improvements other than not long enough.
I got used to they beats and the rhyme scheme then it ended.
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