Let my heart hold this pen
Let me tell it what to write
Yet another love poem
But it's how I feel so, that makes it alright
I love you like I say I do
And I tell you every night
I am a shadow
You are my light
Again another love poem
How I feel
Is how I write
Author notes
Haven't written in a while... hope it's still good... I still feel it so I hope I haven't lost it..
Please tell me what you think
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That is so sweet big bro honestly i know how u feel because i have found the one i truly love and dont plan to let him get away. i havnt had a chance to read any of your poems but now i do also i havent had time to write but now i will find time to write about sean. well that was a very sweet poem love you.
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awww...very cute babe...i love it...ur so sweet...i miss u so much...cant wait to go sledding lol...i love you...*blows u a kiss*
jenny
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i really like this, i was attracted to it because of the title, and it was great, short and sweet, but well put to the point, if that makes sense, congrates on being able to write again, keep it up!!!
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Essence of poetry
You're there with the basic essence of poetry, to express our feelings. What are you trying to capture withthe "alrigh", "nigh" and "ligh" leaving the "t" off? I wrote a poem about poetry in "Poetry Lost"; check it out. I'd love your input. -
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actualy leaving the t's off was not intetional... thanks for catching that... my keyboard must have been wak'd.. thank you for your comments....
shad
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