The latest ring tone
My cute little phone buzzes
I push the green button
And here it is your message
Thanks for the technology
No more we need to talk
All we need is finger to push letters
On the little phone pad
And off you go typing it all aloud
You sure need me
You even ask me if I could help
Let me know anything you feel
At the moment when you have no other pal
You not have your so called friends
No one around to get you drunk
None of the goons has time for cards
Neither have they returned any of your calls
So, now you thought is the time
You have time spare to say hi
I like a foolish mime
Smile to your false pretence
You portray to let me know
The love you have for me
Wrapped around your finger
It seems so I am
For when you call me
I jump and attend it
You text me when you need me
Or at times slip in to say
You love me
I believe every time every word you type.
If I miss or choose not to read
To me the message you send
You finally decide
I better call and say hi
For I need her around
I still love her for she still loves me
Sure you have lot on your mind
I’ve made every excuse in the book
Used up all the reasons
Trying to convince myself
Even put my relation with my family at stake
Waiting for you to look beyond
Your little selfish world
I’ve been waiting
Went on a roller coaster ride
All the ups and downs I’ve seen
The bumps and ditches I’ve jumped
Stood by you because I do believe
You somewhere have hidden love for me
I’m all ears
I listen to your heart beat
All about your pain and frustrations
The dreams you have beyond our means
Lots of aspirations you want to achieve
But, not once I heard
How was your day?
How are you doing?
Or just held me close to your heart
And listen to my deafening silence
Crying out loud
One look in your eyes
I sense your pain and anger
Console you, lend you my shoulder
Listen and understand your words
I wish I could take it all
I know what you are going through
And you turn around
Say the magic words
I love you, but I’m just not sure
About anything, that includes us
I come to you for you
All you could do was be involved
In your selfish world with you and yourself
Noticed me for a bit
Told me how & what you feel
Without seeing tears floating
My heart breaking
All the madness on my face
My pain and my frustration
I laughed and left the room
Hoping you will try stopping me
But I turn back and see
On the branches moving
On the sounds of blowing winds
Just once please turn around
Go beyond yourself and your selfish world
There is life outside
Waiting for you to hug
Take her hand to that magical land
Where there is love in abundance
Just once see she needs you
But how could I forget
What our relationship is all about
You, it’s all about you.
And, damn I still love you with all my heart
Author notes
What do I do...be selfish and walk away...or stay for that special day...
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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Loved it! Loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it loved it and ....LOVED IT! Good job hun! I loved this poem, I can relate to it! It's amazing keep it up, well I got to go and read your other poes. Take care hun byebye!
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I love this it reminds me of the guy that i lost my virginity too
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ok with any luck this will work you finally get to see the real me i changed my photo, this is the real oldcoasty2
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You are good looking!
As far as me, imagine if my baby is so fine...then...;-)
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been there....
I have been there. And your poem certainly makes someone feel as if they are there too. I can't really tell you what to do for its a decision you have to make yourself. If your always on the back burner its not worth it. and if it is you leaving and finding someone else or something better won't stop it. because it will still come back. Its one of those if you love them really love them let them go kinda things. And if the bending to his every beck and call is hurting you deeply because of him ignoring you at any other time. then hunny honestly don't bend to his every whim do a few then tell him honestly how your feeling. its better to hurt one day strongly then to hurt every day slowly. so stop hurting yourself slowly and tell him how you feel. -
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Thanks Dahlia
I know no one but me, is the one who needs to decide,. It's like I know what to do in my mind, but heart is far from being in sync with it. I know he wants to one way or the other doesn't want to lose me, even if its just being friends and still be around to help him...hmhmhmhmmmmmmmm I did promise him I'll help for the rest of my life and a promise is a promise, not a convenience. OH God I'm just confused and hurt and I've a whole lot too on my plate. So............Thanks for reading and understanding my poem. I really appreciate your thoughful comment.
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Super Write
I like the text messenging part of the poem. I think that is unique and different. This whole poem is a delight to read, very interesting. Nice flow to it. The title fit the poem perfectly. You describe his selfishness all through the poem. You did a good job. I absolutely enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Snappy
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Thanks Snappy Doodles
Thank you so much for reading it, enjoying it and understanding it. Though now I think after reading your comment, OH God he's not that bad, I need to write about his qualities too that are many aand neither am I perfect. He's a great ghai, but not for me, I think. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment and applaud. I'm gald you like it. Thanks again.
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great
totally agree with ur poem and great stylew! love it! great job
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Thanks Again Jess
Thanks SweeT for reading my poem and taking time to comment. I truly appreciate your time and applaud. Thanks again.
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wow, I just hang for every word you said.
It's interesting how everyone needs someone they can talk to. Even you. Only this guy only needed you when he didn't have anyone else. So he never realised that you needed him, or even tried finding out how your day had been or how you were really feeling.
I know I need someone in my life, and I havn't found her yet. But I'm not searching because I need them so much that I'm scared I won't listen to how she feels. It's like people don't want to show that they're hurting inside.
This is a really great poem based on raw emotion. And I loved reading it.
Keep Smiling
Hostage
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Thanks & Good Luck Hostage
Thank you very much for not only reading it, enjoying it too and then taking time to write such thoughful comment and understanding the raw emotions spoken in these lines. I'm sure there is the one made just for you, but just be cautious of not getting hurt. I'm sure you very soon you have her next to you. Good Luck. Thanks again.
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PERFECT
i lvoe this...its ironic...because this is what ive been going through...i love this so much esp...
I’m all ears
I listen to your heart beat
All about your pain and frustrations
The dreams you have beyond our means
Lots of aspirations you want to achieve
But, not once I heard
How was your day?
How are you doing?
Or just held me close to your heart
And listen to my deafening silence
Crying out loud
wow....perfect how you can read your feeling here...and i agree with the point this poem gave...you are a fabulous writer...keep it up
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Thank you CrazyBeauty
Thanks Beautiful for your time and thoughful comment. I'm the biggest example of imperfection who is trying her best to reach close to perfection. But, I really ppreciate you taking time to read and I'm glad you enjoyed so much. Your applauds encourage me more than I express in words. Thanks again.
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nice
great write! from the beginning to the end.
the whole thing just went by like a perfectly
and like a movie!!! great write
keep it up!
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Thanks Sweet Kisses
Thank you so much for reading and understanding this. It's a live movie in which I play the role. But this is what lif e is all about - ups and downs and hopefully he'll notice me before it's too late. All I know I love him and he does love him.
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deep
This is a great write. I like the movie-type feel to it.
"But, not once I heard
How was your day?
How are you doing?
Or just held me close to your heart
And listen to my deafening silence
Crying out loud"
I thought that was the strongest point. It's very unforunate you feel this way though, I've been there before. Like XxxblondettexxX said, it's ultimately your choice. But I suppose just follow your gut feeling...it normally turns out to be right.
Good job :]
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Thanks for goin into the depth
Thanks for taking time to read my turmoil. Thaanks for understanding my feelings, it's tough, but somehow God's going to give me strength and him brains to cope with the situation. But thanks again for your thoughfull comment.
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tough call
hmm. ...well, its ultimately your choice. i thought that this was really good though. i heard your heart in this and its a very strong piece. good work and keep writing.
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Thanks!
Thanks for reading and listening to my heart. I had just stormed out of his house today and felt all of this. I know it's my choice and yet I feel it isn't. I know he loves me and I love him...BUT...I really appreciate you taking time not only to read, but to understand comment. Thanks again!
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