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i need you today..

i need someone to talk to
anyone...
please help me escape my fate.
let me flee onto existance.
let me wake up and see the sun burning in my face.
melting my body into Gods' hands,
lifting me higher than ive ever been lifted.

help me, please help me!

mind on the verge of exploding,
secrets within are becoming me.
help me! help me, please save me.

my mind is not right.
puking every night.
thoughts of suicide fill my mind.
tell me i'll be okay
tell me youll stay.
please ohh please...

        dont fade away....

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as you see the title finishes it off. i wrote it and i dont feel like polishing it up just thoughts..

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  • I love this one. very good emotions in this!


  • smileywiley22
    December 3, 2006

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    see? you ARE a great poet.
    i'm glad youre writing again.

    ♥ Meleah


  • MetalHouse III
    December 3, 2006
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    Im here baby...Im here for you


    • the affluent poor
      December 6, 2006
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      psh i thought i told you...only I can call her baby sheesh =] i love you both


    • mydearest apologies
      December 3, 2006
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      thank you.... i know its shitty write but i was just w.e and i didnt feel like earasing it =/ w.e

  • grlscout125
    December 2, 2006
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    I know that I haven't been able to talk to you recently. BUt I am thinking of you everyday! Cherish

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