Picturing you there and how precious that is
Holding a view of you...photographs of the eyes
Oh to gaze upon you and taking in all your beauty
Taking that and consigning that to my memory
Oh when tonight when I'm dreaming...you're there
Gently on my mind and beautifully waiting now
Right then a picture will never be taken again like this
A smile shines bright and the eyes are illuminated
Picturing you like that in such a beautiful display
Having to take a closer look that makes me mesmorized
Savoring that moment..it will be more than memories
Oh to take my breath away with the vision I'm seeing
Forver letting whatever passions held inside...unleashed
Then to even take a closer look...the senses are ready
Having rediscovered just what the beauty of you brings
Especially right now...the photographs of the eyes live!
Everything then comes to life for something's been added
Yes..I'm there with you and now it's vividly come to life
Enveloped in a vision...one so precious and so real
Something photographs of the mind brings...sweet reality
David
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Very nice. Good luck.
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Terrific
This is sweet, I wouldnt go as far as saying picture perfect, but it paints the idea of a perfect picture and theres a soulful real love portrayed through your image. I appreciate this it's definitely worth the witness.
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Wonderful
Yes a very precious write David
An excellent Acrostic at the same time. Beautiful words obviously written for a very beautiful person. Lovely wrok as always.
Gaylene
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Oh Dave,
I don't think I know of a man who writes such beautiful love poetry as you! You are the king of romance, my friend and it shows with every piece that flows from your pen! Heck, I can't even keep up with all your beautiful writes!
I wish you all the best...always!
Love,
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IT WAS LIKE A HUG
Your poem was like a hug my friend! And today as you know...I need one!
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Whomever you wrote this too...is very lucky!
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WOW! Now this is a precious and beautiful piece...coming from the heart of a man who is so much in love....this has captured so much....smiles....Love, Terry
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