Just because you can, doesn't mean you should.
Understand the consequences for everything you do.
Stop and think what would happen you were in my shoes
Tempting as it is, whats your reasons!?
I want to know why you would make this choice
Feeling like you have no voice
You really need some help here!
When you call I can be there
Helping you on your way
Yet somehow you always manage to hide
You cut your arms with that sharpened Knife!
Over and over your screams go unheard
Under that darkness of the night
Dont be afraid the angels do call your name
Only darkness has gripped you again
In every thing you say and do
Time is of the essence!
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awsome, girl you write good stuff..
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Wow, this is very direct, normally I prefer abstract poems, but the tone of this really made me freeze in time (not that I was jogging or anything, but still), anyways, I really enjoyed what this piece had to say..
I think if some grammatical errors were fixed, this would sound much better, however this is still nicely penned.
I wish you the best in the contest!
Blessings,
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Thankyou so much for your comments!
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your welcome.
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WOW!!!!!
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Thanks much xx
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