hey guys this is a new thing i am working on, but i have no way to save it where i am at. so this is just ideas... but this is the first in a while...
I gave it all to hold your hand
I gave it all to sing you songs
i gave it all to make you smile
to make everything worth your while
I gave it all
I gave it all
You took it all to get your joy
You took it all to feel that good
You took it all just for your needs
everything for your acrid greed
you took it all
you took it all
Please tell me what you think
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what you have here is what i would call a damn good start. id love to see the finished piece.
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awwww!
this is very good!
such a cute little song!
was that alll.
i would have loved to read more!
take care!!
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yay
i can not wait 'till it's finished!! <3 -
i gave it all to help you understand
i gave it all to right your wrongs
i gave it all to catch your tears
to chase away all your fears
i gave it all to help you through
i gave it all to hear you laugh
i gave it all to make you mine
to keep you always in my heart and mind
i gave it all, all to you
i gave it all on your behalf
i gave it all to make you happy
to have you here forever with me
meh thats just an idea..and not a great one (on my behlaf i mean, not yours) hope it comes along well and take care x
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