Dear beautiful,
My heart harbors such feelings as I can scarcely explain. I don't have the courage to say them, though the words be simple and plain. Ever since I saw you, not a minute passes without my thoughts turning to you. But every time I see you, I get weak and panic. All the words I planned to say escape me, and my inner most feelings kept locked up deep inside. However, there's a ruthless volcano in my soul that's constantly erupting for you. This feeling is brutal; yet, there is an inexpressible passion that lingers within. It's like standing at the altar, gazing at the bride's to be and find oneself falling in love all over again. This beautiful moment stands on its own. It marvels in the darkness and filters love throughout obscurity. Thus, this love is not out of reach, it requires time and patience.
Dear sweetheart, crazy it may seem but the reality speaks for itself. As I sit here gazing at the unknown, my spirit flies out toward empty space and scans the dark sky to find your star. Although it may sound a little cliche, as I sit here scribbing in the blue every little bit of my sentiments, an angel appears in front of me as I day dream of you. She says that she is God angel sent, and God is jealous for I admire you way too much. But one thing she does not know, like an inmate in prison, your beauty is the only ray that pierces my soul and enlightens me with hope and joy. You may find that quite hard to believe, but no matter how the weather is, with you on my mind, I am as calm as the pacific. When I think of you, a thousand of the most amorous thoughts come to me. Many times when I sit alone to only wonder about us, I often picture us somewhere in the middle of the ocean sailing upon motionless waves like mermaids.
My sweet angel, I love you and that I swear. Only if you could see the smile that run accross my cheeks as I'm thinking of you, you'd certainly know that this love I have for you is undeniable. Yet at times, I sit alone and let sadness consume me when all I have to do is tell you how I feel and my spirit would then shine like midnight star. The uncertainty of you understanding how I truly feel is my only curse. And for that same reason; I'm dying like a shedding candle on a stick. I wish I was assured by your umbrella of reassurance. Trust me darling, very few people understand why the sky is blue. I bet you don't even have a clue of how sad I am to know no matter how much of a fool I may make out of myself, my chances with you are not guaranteed. Yet, your existence inside of me is the only imperishable treasure I posess. If only you knew how much I pine for you, my name would be the softest breeze that has ever caressed your lips.
Here I am pleading for your heart; yet I'm fearful. But which great man has not crawled before he could stand on his own? You may not be able to see through my soul but my love is unfurling for you like wings of spring butterflies. Oh my dear, how refreshing is that cold stream cascading beneath this lust of stardust? So I think, love would always far me off for I’ve toured the world and have seen nothing but pure illusion. Apparently, I’ve been wrong all along. But from the succulent conversations we often have, I come to realize that my heart is in love with you like a dry throat dying of thirst. Oh yes my lady, vision of you leaves me unrest like a homeless in search of a place to shelter. But how must I caress such emptiness that makes my heart ache when love is shadowed by the unknowing maze?
This amorous feeling has my heart limping like a frog and like Victoria bay, I welcome your flirtatious waves aboard my seashore. Oh darling, as the cloud is my skateboard, I surf the universe in reverse. From the dust of my existence until the last of my dying breath, I will nurse you with love like a mother nurses her child from her own soothing breasts. My heart is nothing but a muscle but the spirit that lives inside of it is a God given gift, I love you emotionally and spiritually. In the solitary road of loneliness you've become the sanctuary of my happiness. Awaiting is the chariot of my sentiments, abide in the commandments and love me without restraint. Some people say that life is nothing but a fairy tale, believe me dear, even the chirping of a cricket could bring music to a deaf ear. Take not my love for granted for a drop of rain could fill up a dry well.
P.s, I love you...
Author notes
2) write about what it felt like the first time you realized you were in love with who you love
-how you felt, what you thought...
I'm feeling all mushy, a girl has me feeling this way. I love her so much... darling, this is for you.
A contest entry
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Silver trophy winner
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Honorable mention
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Silver trophy winner
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I bid a lot of point just to get a honest comment,
Comments
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Wow.. you won alot of trophies for this poem. Ha, I guess it maybe ne in publishin book one day but Amazing that all I got to say I like the first part and second it reminds me how I feel when I had a crush on dis boy all those feelings I waz scared but anyways Amazing and Beautiful and she is very lucky to have a guy like you who expressed your feelings to her thanks for entering and Good luck
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Wow you won 11 trophys with this poem, It is a really god poem. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read.
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Wow this has won you quite a lot of trophies; I wonder how the girls feel knowing that it's been entered in so many different contests for AP families LOL
very well written [who am i to disagree] [eyes suspiciously] you sound liket he perfect man .. hmmm
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WOW, just awesome,
well, deserving of all the trophies.
Bravo for you!!!
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This is incredibly romantic
methinks a gal might melt if this were written for her
good luck in the contest
moon2u
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This is a beautiful entry,
wow i really envy this girl, you must love her alot!
thanks for entering and good luck
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Thank you for your beautiful entry,now this truly made me sigh in the biggest way, to tell you the truth I would love some man to speak like this to me, so you certainly gained my attention with your write, and lucky is the lady this is written for, hope you tell her soon, as this kind of love shouldn't be held back, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This is beautiful. And I love the ending, P.S. I love you, how beautiful an ending, thank you for sharing this.
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Wow
this was soo sweet. i adore it
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who would you like to be in my ap family?
possibly youd make a good older brother, hmmm
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okay well message me back and we can discuss
thanks for entering
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awesome... at some point while reading it i forgot to breathe...
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awww, wow, this is amazing, you deff know how to woe a girl.lol congrats on all the trophies and good luck in the contests
Stephanie ♥
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While I was reading your Letter of Love I lost myself in the images you created. Wonderfully written and truly deserving of the trophies you already have.
Thank you for entering and best wishes in the judging.
Love Margaret
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Truly a beautiful piece of art. Your words are very touching...Excellent job. Thank you
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Awh, so sweet. Love is great and you expressed your emotions well. I hope they know how much you love them. I can relate very much. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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This is lovely and truely beautiful! Too cute! Thanks for entering this contest!
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it was really beautiful...i loved the language you used in it, it was definitely worth reading.
I liked the way it was not directly a poem, but carried great poetic language within it.
It was a very good piece of writing, filled with feelings and emotions.
my favourite lines were:
Here I am pleading for your heart; yet I'm fearful. But which great man has not crawled before he could stand on his own? You may not be able to
see through my soul but my love is unfurling for you like wings of spring butterflies. Oh my dear, how refreshing is that cold stream cascading beneath
this lust of stardust? So I think, love would always far me off for I’ve toured the world and have seen nothing but pure illusion. Apparently, I’ve been
wrong all along. But from the succulent conversations we often have, I come to realize that my heart is in love with you like a dry throat dying of thirst.
Oh yes my lady, vision of you leaves me unrest like a homeless in search of a place to shelter. But how must I caress such emptiness that makes my heart
ache when love is shadowed by the unknowing maze?
it is all so beautiful.
thank you for sharing this with us all.
good luck in the contest,
keep writing,
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This is so long. Haha. But it's beautiful. So full of love and what not. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Thanks for entering. It made me smile.
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you know this had to be the most marvelous gorgeous love letter i have ever read a day in my life. thanks a lot artist good luck in the contest
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very nice love thoughts you penne dhere this was a poem with a many oooh's and aww's here and there
i see why you won a few golds and every other trophies nice job
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I simply adore how you put such a beautiful poem in a letter
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Words cannot describe how gorgeous this is. I would critique it, but there's nothing to fix, nothing to change. It's all marvelous.
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It's an extremely good love letter. It really crawls under my skin.
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O my...This is one of the best I have read...Simply because it does exactly what I asked for...It gives emotion and feels like it comes from the heart...it took my breath away to read something so beautiful! This is a great write!!! AMAZING!!!
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This is quite beautiful and feels as if it comes direct from the heart. Words of love are poetry in whatever form. Many of us have difficulty expressing our deepest emotions but that is only fear of rejection. To express them and be denied is painful. I liked the lines
my chances with you are not guaranteed. Yet, your existence inside of me is the only imperishable treasure I posess
that is courage.
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'my spirit flies out toward empty space...to find your star' beautiful i truly believe those words alone sum up finding your soulmate. An amazing write, exquisite, and extremely touching. don't ever stop writing
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Wonderful letter - not quite a poem, but words of love throughout these lines. Quite an impressive collection of hardware you have accumulated too. Congratulations.
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I'm speechless. . .
Wow. That was exquisite. Absolutely beautiful. Your language is so passionate and sweet. . .like . . .well, I don't know what it's like. . .
Awesome work!
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wow!!! this is so amazing!! i love it please keep on writing i would love to read more of what you have written
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Truly wonderful
Is hard to make comment on this write and give it justice. Beautiful sentiments expressed so lovingly. This will be a finalist me thinks lol. Good luck in the contest and congrats on all your other well deserved awards.
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Amazing!
this is amazingly beautiful...i think any gurl who would have sumthing like this written for them would just simply be jaw dropped and speechless.. Great write
Much Luv
♥kaila♥
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exceeding excellence your words encompass love and shower waves of passion that beckon me to ask does she even know. A beautifully written piece of art that painted love upon the page.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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This was so beautiful... I just don't know what to say to something as beautiful as this. If I could whisper sweet words like an agnel I would whisper them to you.. This was just so beautiful.. Beyond beautiful..
Great write..
Peace to you, Jetleena
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Passionate
Very very passionate and emotional. Filled with love and romance. This was lovely. You have a great way with words. Thanks and good luck.
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Holy cow...I am such a chick that romance is wasted on but I couldnt stop reading this, lol.
This is BEAUTIFUL. Stunningly so.
Trust me darling, very few people understand why the sky is blue.....
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Yet, your existence inside of me is the only imperishable treasure I posess....
are my favorite lines....although the whole piece is fantastic.
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Sometimes when you feel that what you love is slipping from you, you need to reach out and grab it. Tell the girl how you feel and that you never want to let her go just never be in fear of rejection other wise you will never have the strength to get what you want. This is a beautiful piece.
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this is really great!! I am envious of your gf! Great write and I enjoyed it so because you can feel the passion just flowing out of this poem. The only thing I found was in the second paragraph where it says 'she says that she is God angel" should say that 'She says she is Gods angel" good luck in the contest!
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Spirit
Oh, now this was just lovely!! All I have to say is that I hope you were chosen as her boyfriend lol... Thank you for entering this into my contest I love it!! It's written in a creative way and it's also quite original! Although I'm a little less ebbed to choosing a prewritten poem, I DO love this one and so I'm definately going to keep it in mind. Thank you!!
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Heart-Written
Though it is prewritten, I'm keeping it on for its lovely form. I'm afraid and slightly ashamed to say I don't understand the vision of the angel, but that is my only bewilderment.
Though you were afraid it sounds cliche, I was delighted to find there was a large portion of original metaphors and similes. For example: "a ruthless volcano in my soul constantly erupting for you" and "my spirit flies out toward empty space and scans the dark sky to find your star" and "a shedding candle on a stick".
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this is amazeing truly wonderful
that woman is luck to have you
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this is very amazing hun thank you for such a beautiful write to read. best of luck in my contest.
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Wow this is absolutely amazing! For some reason I don't think you are really afraid to tell this beautiful woman how you feel. But the talent in this piece is awesome! And look at all these trophies amazing!
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Wow this is so powerful she sure is a lucky girl I hope she knows how you feel it would be a sin to let this love evaporate. LO-AMO SALUTE!!!!!!!! -
Ths is a great letter to someone you love.
Great write.
Keep up the great work.
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Wow just beautiful!,no doubt about that,this made me smile and also restored my faith in men as I was lead on by someone for 5 months and he was also engaged,Thank you,Hazel
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It is no wonder that you have picked up so many gold and silver trophies with this letter.
It is beautiful, from the heart. The emotion and love just oozes out.
Excellent!
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Fantastic write. I love how you made it into a letter. Well done and good luck
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Wow Wow Wow blown away by the level of this piece! Not what i was looking for as in you havent put anything i asked in the authors notes however...... you have done an amazin job! That last night is brilliant! it is a fantastic write good luck in my contest!
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In the end,don't you mean "caresses"?
Anyways,a fantastic piece...made my heart flutter..
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Do you think the last verse should be the last verse?
I mean the whole thing ends in a drug to carress your tongue...
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I see this and see prose, paragraphs. I know that there is prose poetry, but this is in letter format, and even though the words are wonderful, filled with lovely thoughts and words, the format just is foreign to my idea of poetry. Congratulations on all the trophies won in various contests. Very deserving, I'm sure.
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Honesty...I just wanted to rewrite this because I found that I had more to say!!
To the most honest of all and those who easily decieve, a life to be taken, and a breath of air that we need, here is the moment, when time passes not slowly, with a touch or your words, and a small hint of rhyme, to those who are foolish, and to those who sense a stubborn mind, I am finding here all to surely, that you have a gift to turn a womans head upside down. With words so perfectly intune, stunning even the dullest of pain, harming a heart that is covered in wounds, you have taken a moment, stepped outside the room, watched eagerly as they paraded, and came into swoon. Very lovely peice of writing. How delicate a heart is, though only a peice of flesh, how reliable we are to only looks, and the slightest touch. We sense the second that heaven is only a distance within our grip, to others looking in we must be most unpleasant, but when we can find a love as sweet and true, as perfect, and delicate as our own, how we loathe to see them without our hands in theirs, in a day, as shaded by the moon, a star far far off from here, a hero in a war, a thousand I love you's, not a minute without fear, I can resemble the greatest sin, the best pleasure in the world, how two words could turn this inside out upside down and frontwords back, only in a second, a goal, a sensual feeling, how they can all come to and rise, into a love, a deeper feeling and inspiration, love. -
Aww *tears in eyes* well I would love for you to be my AP brother
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That has got to be the most beautiful love letter I have ever read...sighs...you have penned the words we all long to hear Thank you kindly for sharing with me and for entering
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Wow. Lots of wow. Holy balls, wow. That was so wonderful. I loved it so much! I love the last paragraph. And the last sentence or two. It was so wonderful! And fantastic! Extremely heartfelt and just wow. Thank you for entering!
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Holy cow!!!....I am melt by your words Is I am dreaming? Well, well if this is just a dream, then I don't want to wake up, if this is just a fairy tale then it is a wonderful experience... I could feel something move inside my soul as I read this romantic poem.
It's great man, I love it! what's your number?:9
Great writing!
Thanks for entering my contest!
~~GRACE~~
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This is probably one of the few poems in the contest that is so detailed. This is the first time that I’ve actually taken the time out to read a poem in a paragraph form like that, it just looks so intimidating. But anyways, back to the poem. It really illustrates how people feel about their “crushes” at first. I could also sense the nervousness that was within it. It’s a very charming write. My favorite line is:
“While gazing at the unknown, my spirit flies out toward empty space and scans the dark sky to find your star.”
It was also engaging, because I couldn’t tell you how much I didn’t want to really read it by just looking at the length, but I am truly glad that I did. Marvelous write.
Thank you and good luck in my contest.
-Dana.
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hmmmm...I like this one alot.
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I love this love leter it, is so full of honest emotion, jealously, happiness and sadness all weaved into one. Good Luck in my contest.
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I had to come back and read this poem again... I wish I had this talent to write like this... your words are so heartfelt and your passion is so strong.... Ill probably come back and read the poem a few more times again. Awesome!
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This piece was just so beautiful, really beyond that. I'm speechless of what to say to it for it was so touching and sweet. I loved it, you did an excellent job writing it. Thanks for entering my contest.
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wow, I can see why you have been a gold trophy winner, that was gorgeous, well written. thanks for entering and good luck!
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A very beautiful poem written from the heart. I can tell from your poem that your feelings are real. Great job!
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wow ! amazing I love it such a beautifully written romatnic letter touches heart warms your inner spirit thank you for entering good luck
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This was a beautiful entry. Certainly something every women would love to hear. Good luck in the judging.
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I absolutely loved this!!! Wow!! This is a great write!
So beautiful! Thank you so much for this entry! I love it!!! Best of luck to you in the contest!
Leslie
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awesome poem
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this is very sweet i love how you used very caring word
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This story reveals a journey."You'd be the sweetest tasting drug that ever caressed my soul"Simply beautiful and erotic and sensual. This is by far the most extrodinary descrition I have ever heard in reguards to a muse. Powerful!!!Powerful!!!
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WOW! This piece was amazing. Honestly. I can definitely see how you won two gold trophies and an honorable mention with this poem! Keep on writing!
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Truly I wish to be the soft breeze upon your lips. Let you be the river that refreshes my soul. If a simple look could drive me insanely crazy for your love, I wonder what would a little of your touch do to me? I bet I'd be sprung, you'd be the sweetest tasting drug that ever caress my tongue.
Well a quite powerful verse is here revealing the journey of the muse in relation to its connection with this life and the love ..this is very soothing letter...I can see the depth and beauty of the life in your heartwarming words here in this letter bringing a kind of the calm in the muse and touching the soul somewhere inside..this is a wonderful experience of reading this poem..Thank you so much for such a beautiful work here..
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This is really good... beautifully written!!!!
I like the depth of the passion... the obvious deep feelings you have for the recpient...
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What a wonderful love letter you have penned here. This reminds me of love letters that would have been written in the days of renasaince(sp?). So incredibly romantic!
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This is beautiful, and it is the deepest emotion, you have such passion, and so much hope for this person, itis defiently a poem that brought tears to my eyes, it made my heart lift from my stomach, and my eyes open wide. This is a gift to retrieve in my contest, it is defiently a one of a kind, and hopefully you will continue to write poems so kind, this is absolutely gorgeous, and good luck and hopefully you had a great time writing this poem. because it sparks interest in my heart, and from your comments, a whole lot of others as well.
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This is absolutly amazing!!!!!!! I truely loved this peice and everything about it....it possativly shows that intense longing weaved into the fabrick of the heart for another, esspecial if they are unattanable for what ever reason. This peice absolutly made my heart ache and my soul weep. What wonderful words and beautiful expressions. One of my favorite parts was:
"My sweet angel, I am lacking of your affection. My soul is darker than midnight. All I wish for in this life is the light of you to light up my path. For heaven's sake; come to me, I'm dying like a shedding candle on a stick."
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A WONDERFUL POEM
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what a letter very beautiful thank you so much for entering into my contst good luck
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Your emotions are very real and you bring them out well.I was deeply touched by this.You blew me off my mind.
Best of luck in the contest.
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There's a lot of emotions here, which is great! You definetely made me smile
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Wow. this was very nicely done =]
This is such a deep love letter so full of feelings and emotions. kudos to you deary! -
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You should have won the Gold trophy!
april
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This is a most deep love letter. And, I envy the person to whom it is directed, where's my man's love letter, I'm afraid that this letter is going to up all my standards for letters in the future, you have set the bar awfully high, for sure. lol
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Awwww Beautiful
This is so amazing,I said make my heart melt and you sure did that.I love this write as it speaks from the heart of a true admirer...
Good Luck and thanks for entering this piece,as it is just beautiful.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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Show off!! No really this was absolutely beautiful. "Truly I wish to be the soft breeze upon your lips"...*sigh* I really wish you all the best in this contest...I'm speechless. You have a wonderful way with words. You know how to charm a woman's pants off lol! Good luck!!
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Very Charming
Heart felt enchantment I see in this write. It is Beautiful and I thank you for inviting me to read such a wonderful tribute. You do very well in expressions of the Heart & Soul.
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Wow. That was beautiful. I think my favorite line was the part about a shedding candle. You write so charmingly. Amazing write, and good luck in my contest!
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This letter of love very much touched my heart especially what you says in introduction.
I felt this knock in my heart and it made my heart tingle. Definitely seemed as though it was written from the heart.
Your piece speaks of a very real love and I could feel the words. I can sit here for hours thinking of this letter and it makes me think about a lot of things....
I almost blown away!
Well done and good luck in my contest!
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Now that is one heartfelt letter...Hope your significant other finds this as endearing as I felt when I read it...its as if I was over hearing a candlelit conversation between 2 lovers of desirre and wanton..Good job...Good luck!
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Beautiful
It felt like you were right beside me, talking to me and telling me all this. I got chills. This holds excellent imagery, when you talk of god's angel, and how hw is jealous. That makes me laught...the thought of God being jealous because envy is a sin, but it adds to it. It's wonderful. Thanks for entering such a loving and beautifil romantic piece.
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There is so much unbridled love chocked throughout this wonderful writ. It seems that you are smitten. When that happens it is hard for us to think of much else. That is evident in these well chosen words from a desirable heart. I do hope she knows what she would have if she gave in to your summons. I hope you have the wherewithal to let her know. This is simply beautiful. It so reminds me of The Song of Solomon in the Bible. How the King so loved the Shumanite woman. Absolutely spilling from a heart that seems to be in need of this person. Excellent!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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beautiful!
Your words are always so enchanting and beyond beautiful! If ever a man wrote to me like this I would close my eyes and pray to God he would save me from this lonely abyss! Wow!!!!!!!! Haitian you amaze me more each and every time I read your awesome writes. I am mesmerized a man can even feel so deeply! Thank you for giving me hope! If only I heard such beauty in your messages. I hope your words not only inspired me but inspired your self as well!
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This is a delightful read and it made me think of a student with a huge crush on a teacher and how he would write down his thoughts and longings in a poem. It would make most women weak at the knees with these words given. Oh that there would be men in the world who could do more of this. I loved it and well done, thank you for sharing the beautiful letter with all of us.
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Breathtaking!!
Beautiful Poet ouffff you make my skin shivers with this exquisite poem!!! I read it without pause and with sheer pleasure until the end This line among so many so exemplary -
am not assured by your umbrella of reassurance. Understand me when I tell you this; few people understand why the sky is blue
Indeed, angels are unique and they are the sweetest affectionate God's creatures for first rate love. Love and Blessings xx
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From the heart
Obviously, you're not making this up. Your emotions glimmer off the page with every word. Love is alive in your heart & soul. And it shows. ~Mark
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Hmmm oh man....I wonder where do you get this peace of mind...I don't know i mean you should wirte your own book and let your work pass down for ages...
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