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Proud Peacock

Pretty peacock
Sitting proud
Upon such lovely flowers

Lovely colors
Sending out
Messages of love

Blues, purples
Brights and
Greens

Shades of
Light and dark

Pretty peacock
Standing
Proud

Nothing in this
World
Has

 

More reason

to be
Proud


Pretty peacock
So full of
Grace

Let’s see those
Lovely
Feathers

Valerie Peterson Brown

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Option #5
the Peacock Background

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  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    January 4, 2007

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    Lovely!

    A lovely depiction of the image of this beautiful creature, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done poet! Good Luck!
    xxoo
    dk


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 27, 2006

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    excellent~

    Beautiful
    I love this sis
    But I hate to hear them....they sound like a wildwoman but their plumage is so very very beautiful...
    Best of luck in the contest sis
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 1, 2006

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    excellent once again

    these proud bird do love to strut their stuff and they make good watch dogs(birds)to you sure made them look beautiful.