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How Do I Tell You?

There is something,
I need to tell you
But how do I begin?
How do I tell you
That I love you
How do I tell you
That I need you
How do I tell you
I can't live without you
I want to tell you
But then again I don't
cause I'm so afraid
You won't feel the same
How do I tell you?

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  • HaleyMary
    December 1, 2006

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    Beautiful write. So often, I think lots of people feel this way sometimes. I feel like I could relate to this piece, while I wanted to be a friend with a guy a few months ago. I just wanted to be his friend because he smoked and I couldn't envision a relationship with the guy, but I never said anything and live to regret it. So, my advice to you is just to tell him how you feel. Even if this guy doesn't feel the same way at least there's a possibility that you could make a friend. Anyway, great write.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 1, 2006
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    that is why we say I am speechless...

    so true it is when we are stunned by some fascinated objects the we all are speechless and the 'love' is the only object which makes us everytime just speechless and sometimes uncertain as well and here this has come out so beautifuly in just great and honest expressions....