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Hands of mine warm to the very touch

Search for the one thing that remains hidden

I feel its heart beat beneath my palms with every flicker of my thumb

Rough surface, fabric, denim dark blue cool to the very touch acts as my barrier

Trapped lost, anxious with such anticipations waiting it peeks it head to the surface

Now in sight warm slender hands of mine grabbed hold

Whispered unclear words echoes around me as warm soft inviting breeze trickle down the curve of my spine

Warm hands of mine now explored the object that once seemed hidden.

Like a bud being watered it grows in seconds in the palm of my hands.

Curious finger of mine slowly travel the smooth surface to its fullest length up till the very tip
A pulse, slight movements a slight shudder from the surface.

Whispered soft words so unclear was no more, as I felt each syllables slowly seep within me making me tremble with unexpected delight.

Heart beat of mine quickens with untold
Excitement wanting too explore.

Shallow breath of mines quickens drawing in the cool night air to cool the surface of my skin.
Curious fingers of mine now wonder back down the smooth now tender surface

Warm tender hands of mine now stands rested bellow, while unexplored urges began to take over the subdued side of me.

I wanted more to hear the echoing words and make them become clearer. Warm slender hands of mine grabbed hold once again ever so firmly. Warm slender hands of mines now races along the smooth exterior wanting to reach the very tip.

A pulse a shiver, a shake; unexpected screams not of pain but pure pleasure escaped all around me. Warm moist air seemed to cocoon my body warming me with every touch.

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  • leo2
    December 1, 2006
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    This does have the feel of a self-gratification episode because there are so many references to 'hands of mine'. You definately found the right spot in my heart.

    Regards,
    Leo Long
    ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    November 30, 2006

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    An interesting write. Definitely has the sexual tones, and perhaps just me, but sounding of self fulfilment. The feeling of this was good overall.

    Thanks for entering and good luck
    Storm