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A complicated effert.

Her heart is breaking as it heals
Two guys but with one girl
She wants them both
Both want her and something else
The first wants a life without worry
but she needs a thrill.
The second wants other girls as well as her,
and shes so protective.
She wants them both
Both want her and something else
Both may loose what could of been
the greatest they could of ever had.
She might loose,
if she can not choose,
what could of saved her life.

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    March 28, 2007
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    What a dilemma! Very nice write!

    Blessings,

    Azlyn


  • dream5111
    January 28, 2007

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    "Her heart is breaking as it heals" is my favorite part. this is very well written and even though ive never been in this situation i can see how people can realate to it great write


  • Robert Rumery
    November 30, 2006
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    loved it A-Girl!

    That's good Ailene.. very powerfull!