Your arms around me, hugging me tight
Next to your heart beat
Staring into my shy eyes, that can no more blink
For I’m too sinking deeper into your big blue loving eyes
Your masculine fingers gently moving my falling hair
As you blow your naughty sighs on my face
While my heart performs the love dance
To the rhythm of your arteries playing
Sweet loving melodies
I’m deaf to the sounds of the world
For I’ve heard, to me what you said
Quietly loudly in my waiting ears
I love you, the 3 magical words
Followed with eternal words… for now and ever…
The handles of clock dropped
The lord of time has stopped
Soundless are the frozen winds
Our lives have been paused
For a second longer than eternity
No one else seems to be around
Everything is cold standstill
Only what I hear is
The marching of our hearts forward
With the souls applauding
To the bands of our journey we are about to begin
Till the end, that will never happen
Dare I utter a word?
For I’m very scared
Of not what will happen in the future
Or thinking will this be for ever?
But thinking of what if this is forever indeed?
If it is, it better be for good
I’ll fight with God, if I have to
Sitting above, if even thinks of separating us ever
Yes, I love him so much and more
The time is now to speak my heart
Or lose him forever.
Yes! I love you sweetheart
For now and ever…
Oh God! What have I done?
Hold me before I drop dead
But how I will, as I’m alone no more
He is with me to hold my hand
For now and ever…
I meant, thank you oh God!
For now and ever…
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Just one infinite moment is sometimes more than entire eternity
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I loved it hun!
"Yes, I love him so much and more
The time is now to speak my heart" I loved that part! Well I loved everything but I also love that! Keep it up hun! I loved it, well I love everything you do. Keep it up! I'm going to go read your other poems so take care. Lot's of love Lil Lankan
*muah*
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awsome
sweet poem
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Thanks Princess
Thank you sweeT for your applaud, I really appreicate you giving away your points to me. I'm glad you find it sweet. Thanks again.
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Amazing
It's truly wonderful. You wrote it as poetry and as prose. The hesitation and the insecureness was mixed with the most wonderful feeling in the world: love
I only have two things I feel I ought to say: First verse 3rd line: I think you mean "staring" not "starring" and a line further down "too deeper" sounds ... wrong.
But otherwise simply brilliant! Keep on loving so strongly and you will (hopefully) be very happy!
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Thanks a Million for the Advice the Wise
Thank you so much for the suggestion & I've corrected those, I really appreciate your thoughfulness and pointing little details that shows you really took time off of your precious life to read my poem. I again, thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Wonderful sentiment of your love for your man, I sense a bit of doubt in this though, as if your hopeing and wondering if all will work out, i am sure it will, great write
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Thank You Mr. Wise
Thank you for taking time to read my sentiments and yes you are right, there was a little doubt in my mind, but hopefully everything will work out, faith is a wonderful notion I try hold tight. Thanks again for your sweet concern.
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This is a very good poem that you have penned, filled with so much love very uplifting and inspiring well done dear poet
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Thanks Angel
Thanks for your time. I'm happy you enjoyed my writing and found it uplifting and inspiring. You understood it very well. Though I'd had my doubts but, was ready for a fight to be with him too. Thanks again for your comment.
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Excellent
I think everyone who is in love feels this way. Love is forever and when you find the right person it is well worth the wait. Yes Thank the Heavenly Father for the love He has given you. Good luck...God bless
HAPPYMOMMA
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Thanks Momma
YOu are right, it's well worth the wait only if you find that one...Thank you for taking time off your precious life to write a beautiful and thoughful comment. I'm glad you enjoyed and understood my poem. Thanks again.
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