my gal is pretty
pretty as a butterfly
pleases every eye.
Author notes
Written May 14th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Recovery, Mentors, Butterflies, Spring by walkinthereign.
375 points, ended May 18, 2008, 16 entries
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simply lovely
im glad you have found someone you love who you are proud of. Being in love is the greatest feeling in the world.
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oooo! this is lovely...hey, does it pleases EVERY eye
I liked the comparison you made in which you made your girl as wonderful and pretty as the butterfly...Donna know how to explain but I felt second line having deep impact over me...
But, the third line isn't a surprise...everyone knows ...girls always please every eye 
"~'.Star.'~" -
this is a very nice poem. i really liked it. it was short and to the point and those are usually the best ones. it was also very sweet. keep up the great work
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...a joyful and elegant butterfly...:-) Nice.
Maria -
So sweet Bill!!!!
To be thought of as a beautiful butterfly.....very sweet!
~Laura
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A lovely sweet write/ Love,Sherry
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