Someones dying in someones arms right now
You know how they feel and how it doesnt seem right
Lives come and go
But most of the time they are cheated
How do you respond?
Fight every second
Grieve
Let them go
You should know by now
We dont have much time left
Can you live with yourself?
Can you truly tell me yes?
Youve killed that person more than once
And as soon as you get the chance you're gonna do it again
Someones life is in your hands...
So tell me...
Are you gonna do it again?
A contest entry
- Breath of Fresh Air by Virgoan.
450 points, ended December 20, 2006, 50 entries
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Comments
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Rhetorical sound emanating into my mind and soul as I read this piece. The chance\choice in a moment catched. Nice thoughts.
Lines worth remembering:
Grieve
Let them go
Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the contest. Keep writing.
---"I don't know what to say. Do read my mind."---VIRGOAN
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