flower to flower
flutter,flutter,butterfly
please my jaded eye.
Author notes
Written May 14th, 2003.Senryu.
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very pretty
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I love the imagery to this haiku/senryu....
I'm a HUGE reader of haiku and senryu. It pleases my jaded eye, too. Butterflies will always be one of nature's wonders.
Well done!
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Flutter~by me butterfly
flowers delight the eye
grace on the wing...............Laura
I love your KU's Bill! ~Laura 
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Loved this haiku...very nice...it made me feel good as I read it...thank you, maria
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