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Eyes of the Beholder

 

 

 

 

 

Brush strokes, in hidden guise,
streak across the parchment;
illumination leaps, in
comprehension and enjoyment,
as the metaphor of passion
flares, in the eyes of the
beholder.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • tawk gold member
    December 1, 2006

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    Awesome read, I could feel your emotion throughout the write. Keep up the wonderful writing, good luck in the contest


    • cutiepie gold member
      December 1, 2006
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      Thank you Tawk, for your kindness and generous support


  • individuality gold member
    November 30, 2006

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    a good piece, enjoyable read. i thank you kindly for entering your poetic piece and good luck to you in this contest - spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...