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I feel

So, I feel like I'm standing
At the edge of a cliff
Looking down onto the rocks below,
To jump, or to not?

So, I feel Im completely past
The point of no return
I can't turn back at all
Yet, I can't go forward

So, I feel like I'm lost
Alone in the dark woods
Searching for the north star
To lead me back home

So, I feel like it's worthless
This whole thing we call living
I'm not sure if I live,
Just exist as best I can

So, I feel like I'm drowning
Gasping for air above the surface
I can see the top but somehow
Don't know how to reach it

So, I feel like I'm stranded
On a desert island somewhere
And there is only one person
Who can save me

Please tell me what you think

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  • sky black
    December 1, 2006
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    hmmm

    really good poem sweetie, tis been awhile since you've written something.
    is everything ok? this is a real down and emotion filled poem.. something u wanna talk about?
    hope all is well, and i loved this description of this poem.
    love always
    kari lou xxx