Brown shoe treks over land
Mountains are anthills, very easy.
Brown shoe's feet are tired.
Brown shoe find lake near.
Peacful, it's quite a nice find.
Brown shoe drifts off slow.
Brown shoe by lakeside,
Rests like newborn babe.
Brown shoe likes rest.
Brown shoe awakens,
Wipes sleepy eyes and stands up.
Brown shoe starts again.
Author notes
I give full Credit to Lynn Fortney, for it is she who wrote it and not I.
Please tell me what you think
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earthiness seen in the seeking
Lynn Fortney's friend? Are you proving it's postable?
"The Brown Shoe's Quest" has a redoable feel with the same covering for steps. The stooryline almost has an unsocialness with that only looked at, yet it's repaced through with actions to be watched as :
"Brown shoe by lakeside,
Rests like newborn babe.
Brown shoe likes rest."
which isn't a longer for lonliness.
It's like taking a pacifier humidifier of a mother's breath.
That so honorablt honing, after renewable energy got to feel bendable again :
"Brown shoe treks over land
Mountains are anthills, very easy.
Brown shoe's feet are tired."
I know this is tellable but the second stanza is rattly compared to the third right away with no indeciseveness.
The ending was was uniquely snappily put with:
"Wipes sleepy eyes and stands up."
The quickness even revivable with the very last line!
It all makes me think if she's writing about you... tam-a-go. -
A series of kids books then....your friend can start a new type of childs fiction with this.
I like it.
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