The words drip from the mouth as drops
Complete until they touch something and
Shatter
Shards of meaning
Into a puddle
Of the same
Please tell me what you think
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I like this, short, but that gives such a precise and elegant quality
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SO WONDERFUL!!!!
I agree that the things said by people do not mean much anymore these days. It is so sad for there was a time when what a person said was taken as fact. A truly insightful and wonderful write.
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I like , Storm
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Bril
I can't put my finger on why exactly I enjoyed this so much but I thought it was really great. I came across your name from on of the groups and was interested. Where did you come up with the name leakypen thats so kwl? Anyways I loved you wee poem and your page is really cool x
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very good
This poem is beautiful. Short but strong and true in meaning.
Katie
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Excellent
I don't know what it is about this poem, but I really like it. It's short, which is the kind of poem I like. *three thumbs up*
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