Little girls pick
flowers In eden.
little boys climb
trees in the sky.
Heaven is so
filled with
children,
even God has tears
of joy in his eyes.
yet Jesus weeps
for his children
with
sorrow in his eyes,
for men lose
sight Of paradise
once innocence
passes by.
A contest entry
- Colorful Image Contest by FaintWhispers.
450 points, ended May 30, 2007, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Absolutely beautiful
Heaven is so
filled with
children,
even God has tears
of joy in his eyes.
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, that is simply beautiful~ it's poetic and flows nice too~ Good luck to you in the contest!
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I was really impressed since this was a prewrite.
I think it fit very well especially with the flower part.
Good job.
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