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In the Hands of the Nameless Ones

The Cold Air
Swallowed the Life
That was slowly
Made calloused and
Bathed in black
A lying epitaph
Wasted on Wind
And bitter goodbyes
That stains hearts
With dead lies
Across my mind
And Broken Soul
Shall weep from
These Ashen Eyes
As blood seeps
Down into caves
Full of Hurt
Shattered the mirror
That reflected us
Will fall down
In elegant unison
The pain dripping
From my wounds
Whilst this mirror
Lies to me
With evil eyes
Long forgotten promises
And shattered regrets
All consuming my
Broken soul inside
Disappear bleeds on
My shattered hope
As I sing
And nobody watches
While I die.

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  • veach babe
    January 3, 2007

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    this is a really good poem keep it up. so how long have u been writing poems i just started writing them about 1 month ago

  • Halocaust
    November 30, 2006
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    I can't explain my feelings for this one, but I want to hug you and never let go.