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A cry to the heavens

A cry to the heavens calls out loud

Can't have it any other way but this
Right now I have but one thing to say
Yes...a cry to the heavens sends me to you

This day I have many emotions growing
Over time it's been building up here

This is critical for its my existence
Holding you tightly there is what I desire
Especially when a cry to the heavens calls you

Holding you then will release me from my emptiness
Especially when it's right now I need you the most
Anyone can ask for this but will it be answerecd?
Very softly this song of love must reach your ears
Especially when the very emotions are calling
Now more than ever something has to give here
Something that a cry to the heavens will explain

David

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 30, 2006
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    A lovely piece of the heart being displayed here. Well done and best of luck to you in the contest.


  • LadyLavender gold member
    November 30, 2006
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    Incredible

    You are a poet in every sense of the word...I'm so glad that I have a friend in AP...Yeap its you.


  • Sweetangelgrace
    November 30, 2006

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    A very touching poem that really reaches out and touches the mind and the soul.
    Everyone feels this way at times.I really felt your poem. I thought that it portrayed emotions that so many people feel. It personally touched me because I have gone through so much in my life, that it is really easy for me to understand and comprehend the emotion that you composed it with.
    It makes me feel like someone understands the way I feel and it makes me understand that I am not the only one that this has happened to painful.

    But sometimes tears say all that can be said and understanding comes only with time. They say..Life must go on (wink)
    Wish you love, peace, light and pleasure!

    HUGS,
    GRACE


  • Desire gold member
    November 29, 2006

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    Beautiful-

    A Beautiful verse of Love You have penned my Friend~
    Spoken from the Heart and that is where it starts~
    One cannot help but smile after inhaling such
    words~~

    Thank You for sharing Your talent~
    I have a lot of catching up to do....

    Keep that smile on busy bee!
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes to You
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • lovelustre
    November 29, 2006

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    a cry to the heavens in search of love.
    it seems like a reasonable request.
    love is for everyone.
    everyone should have love.

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