Her dreams withheld, words unspoken.
Her heart to weld; damaged; broken.
With crushed hopes and tired eyes,
Now she mopes, forever cries.
Draw in close, or step away.
Call her gross, day by day.
Stab her through, count to ten.
I promise you, she’ll die by then.
1, you strike. 2, she screams.
3, she fights. The blade gleams.
5, she’s scared. 6, you freak.
7, she cared. 8, she’s weak.
9, you run. 10, she’s dead.
Now, she’s done. It fills your head.
What to do; now she’s gone
And you knew, but went along.
It haunts your mind, your own hate.
You were so blind, but it’s too late.
You killed that girl because of fear.
It’s when she’s dead that you see clear.
You scream her name; you take it back.
You say you’ll fix the things you lack.
But all those pleas won’t fix your crime.
What to do? Do the time.
And not the time you do in jail.
The time I mean has no bail.
It’s the time within your heart.
Will it tear your own life apart?
You shouldn’t hate, because it leads
To damaged hearts, and filthy deeds.
Learn to love, and not to fight.
When that’s done, it’ll be alright.
Drown in love or burn in hate.
Learn to love before it’s too late.
You have no clue what words can do.
Some may cry; Ha! Who knew?
You say these things and expect a smile.
You may get one, but all the while
It’s tearing them apart inside.
They say nothing; their pain they hide.
Think twice before you say some things.
You have no clue of the damage it brings.
A contest entry
- Release Inner Anguish (Dark poetry from Dark poets) by Girl With Guitar.
1300 points, ended August 9, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You've missed a number!!
The rhyming pattern through most of this is brilliant and must have taken some heavy concentration! Very well done, I love the content. Great work and thank you for the entry!
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keep it up lol if you love to right keep doin it feel free to message me if you need help im not on all the time but i will get back to you when i get on
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Again...wow!
This is fantastically superb. From what I have read of your work, you are able to write long and short poems and make them flow effortlessly. Your rhymes are amazing and so are you as a poet. I look forward to seeing more of your works.
<3BeautifulDisaster9
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Nice one :]
Hehe wow again this is awesome (especially as you said you couldn't write long ones, you really can!) I really like it, it's really good, nice rhyme and it flows...erm I guess thats all I can say really. Nice write! x
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