I am a fourteen year old girl,
starting over clean and new,
with something more to live for now,
something that i can protect,
I have been searching and searching,
trying to find just one thing,
now i have to be strong and brave,
with a baby to protect,
i have to be a good mother,
it is not easy it is hard,
the long nights and the tired days,
i have to be tough now,
and after all the put downs,
people telling me "you can't",
well now its my turn "i Can",
i wont have an abortion,
im going to pay for what i did,
and im not killing someone eles,
for some thing that i did.
Please tell me what you think
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A very powerful message, and I'm glad you've decided to take responsibility. There's a lot of people who would run away and have an abortion. The grammar could be improved, but I'm not going to point out every detail with this one... lovely write
Coconut
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forgot to give you applause.
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Thank you.
In a way, i take this as a message not to abort children, and i also take it as a message to those who've lost the child anyway. (miscarriage). I wish you all the luck in the world, and remember, no matter how tough it gets, don't ever hit your kid, please, (i'm not saying you will, i'm just saying don't.)because the rewards of being a mother will always out-do all the bad stuff. -
wow i wish when i get older i can rewind my age. LOL.. nice job
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Brave
amazing!! i love this poem. its a great write and has a good message. abortion is wrong and as long as you work hard i believe you can do it! this poem is very inspiring andi wish you luck!!
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WOW....... deff good luck im 17 and i soooo deff admit im not ready for a baby and this is a deff time for you to be strong and be strong for your baby so i wish you the best and the best of luck to you you will DEFF need it b/c im not saying you cant but hun its going to be exstreamly hard so like i said i hope and wish the best!!!
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awwwwwwww
Believe in yourself and know that god only gives you what you can handle.. Being a young mom is hard.. But if you stay strong and face each day one at a time.. You'll be fine.. I was 19 but it was still hard.. Lots of love to you.. Blessed Be!
Green Mother Rose
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Very Noble & Strong
Honey, it is very noble and strong for a kid to own up to her action and be a brave and a bigger person. It is very inspiring and shows the strong character that adults lack now-a-days, unfortunately. It commendable and I applaud for such determination. Very Brave!
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Very inspiring and beautiful. So full of strength.
It flowed so easily. Very good write.
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I wish you all the luck for everything coming your way! It's a brave thing to do, and I respect you so much for trying. Every wanna let off steam, I'm another ear to listen. Great poem. Simple but tough.
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woah... your a mom?
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