A beautiful woman approaches me
Before me she's the epitome of love
Everything about her makes love special
A vision of loveliness and splendor
Unlike anything I've ever seen before
Taken by storm and how she's captivating
I'm in a state here of mesmerization
Forgetting everything except for her face
Understanding the meanings and her passion
Love now has a hold on me here for eternity
When that happened right then I realized
Offering her now the best of my love
My dreams then finally materialized
Attending now to all her needs and desires
Night and day I'm loving a beautiful woman
David
A contest entry
- CREATE YOUR PERFECT MAN OR WOMAN by esroddo.
500 points, ended March 13, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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So sensitive and heartfelt words
Such a beautiful and romantic write I love the way you say at the end that you offering her the best of your love. You did an amazing job on the great write.There is truly love in the air. Thank you for entering and good luck (Lisa)
"When that happened right then I realized
Offering her now the best of my love
My dreams then finally materialized
Attending now to all her needs and desires
Night and day I'm loving a beautiful woman"
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Very nice, my friend! Your love for your lady shines through beautifully!
All the best,
Sandy
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