My love
understand this
My life seems so empty
come back to me here once again
There I want to learn many things
Tell me what to do here
Show me what's right
my love
My love
I need you here
more than ever baby
Never will I love anyone
the way that I love you there baby
I'll always love you there
So listen here
my love
My love
I'll dedicate
my life...my heart...my soul
Forever loving you baby
I want to be by your side there
until the day I die
Remember this
my love
David
Please tell me what you think
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Your heart spoke loud and clear, my friend! It always knows what it wants and who it wants and you did very well for your first attempt at metered poetry!
Wishing you all the best..always,
Sandy -
your words of love shine like jewels of diamonds, rubies and sapphires.
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this was my first attempt at metered poetry...there's so many forms to learn that I'm still a novice...that was a beautiful compliment ()))>---%---
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it is much fun to try different forms of expression.
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yes...as long as the expressions go to the original heart of the matter...that would be very special and so beautiful...
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