Romeo thou art my love to the end of time
Thou cast a spell upon tis heart of mine
Ere all I gaze of thee in eyes of star doth shine
I beseech thee breath of thy soul entwine
Shall I breathe tis love to fly upon the bosom of air
Attend thy ear to tis faithful gracious fair
Love grown infinitely richer and stronger beyond compare
Sweet pilgrim palm of greatest touch forever rare
Pardon me if thou wilt with sented lips of sacred kiss
Heal thee tis powerless saint with touch in perfect bliss
Desire hath taken in my being into thee
Deny not Juliet love, cross thy boundry set thee free
Shall I pronounce for thee my heart throb on and on
Till the stars and earth unite as one
Author notes
"What's in a name? that which we call a rose
By any other name would smell as sweet."
In a list
A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet by Greggs Girl.
300 points, ended December 27, 2006, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romeo and Juliet style by ilove that70s show.
300 points, ended April 2, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 3 options by CharlotteRose.
450 points, ended February 17, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Absolutely beautiful, definitely what I was looking for in this contest. Thx for entering this amazing piece!
Very, very good!
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Now this was good..and a pure love piece here. I love it! The very best of luck to you in the contest.
Kari -
Stunning!
Oh wow! This is absolutely beautiful- the theme, the images, the language all of it is simply beautiful. You've captured the Shakespearian style perfectly, and that in itself takes talent. This piece is passionate, sensual and in a class of its own. You've even incorporated a rhyme scheme, which is spot on and adds a flow to the poem. Read aloud the words blend together and roll of the tongue in melodious manner. Simply wonderful! Well done! xxx
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Wonderful scene
I enjoyed the scene set by your poem
So romantical words made this poem wonderful
Well done -
beautifully written
I write sometimes in Ye Olde English...its a shame that a lot of its forgotten...for with 2 conflicting vesions of England and with more and more slang being entered as words...a lot of tha old fashioned flavor's missing...awesome write...smile, David
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a beautiful poem, i like the style you've gone for, hope you did well in the contest with it! x
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BREATHTAKING GOLD WRITE
MAGNIFICENT. PURE CLASS. I LOVED IT. THE WRITING IS GOLD PLATED. 
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good
this was very well written, and unique. i never would have thought of that
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so sweet
i love romeo and juliet. this poem is great and i wouldn't be surprised if it had been in the story itself -
impressive write that will melt the coldest of hearts
I really feel this and I must say that it really touched the sacred place that I hold so dear. The rhyme scheme is beautiful and I enjoyed this so much. I thank you my friend for sharing it with me....
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i was going to say something about we do not speak like this anymore byut i realise it is written specifically for a contest here. a good piece. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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Moooooooooooaaaaaan. This is precious. Full of the richness and the aching of the nearness of Love.
Bravo!
Marianne -
Wow Shakespeare
I love your poem. Especially these lines:
Love grown infinitely richer and stronger beyond compare
Sweet pilgrim palm of greatest touch forever rare
Nice old English in here.
Good luck in the contest!
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brilliant
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Awesome
This poem is a really good poem. Thank you for entering my contest and I wish you the best of luck.
Toodles
Megan
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Excellent
I personally love the writings of Shakespere. Few words have been better crafted in love.
This is very well done in Old English
Therefore I give you an Excellent
Rick
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very nice sonnet.. I am currently taking shakespeare.. and this is very well written, I am impressed, I also have a sonnet (not a love one however) called seed, I would suggest you to read it if you want to!
very good job again, truly impressed
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Wonderful
It has been so long since I read a poem like this, It reminds me of why I love poetry so, You have done a remarkable job with this poem dare I say master piece, Write on poet Write on
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melody and beauty ../
Melody and the beauty are two factors which are revealing here the truth of the immortal love so deeply and this is because Rosepoet is able to go to the depth of it...Indeed it is a difficult thought to be there with concept of love with so much depth now a days also maintaing the beauty as well..I really appreciate this beautiful work
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WWOOOWW
i havent read a poem like this before.
its nice to see things this great.
=]
keep writing
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i loved this. and i like the font. about time i see something different. i loved the last line. return the favor.
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