A world so calm and peaceful.
Trees full of leaves,
With nests filling their spaces,
With little twitters and tweets.
The grass so green,
The ants march their way,
Through the maze to their,
Tunnerling home.
Th water flows gently,
Down the stream,
Supplying its goodness,
To all of nature.
The flowers bloom
with bees nicking their pollen,
To make their sweetest honey ever.
All living together,
Creatures great and small,cared for by
A goddess
We call Mother nature.
A contest entry
- Nature contest :) by Entwining Beauty.
625 points, ended September 15, 2007, 11 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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beautiful poem good luck
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Very nice. Much of my writing is about nature in one way or another, and I enjoy reading what others write about it as well.
I like how you include some of the forest dwellers and how they are spending they're day, as well as the looks and feel of the woods itself. Very descriptive.
I also like how the first and last lines would fit together well by themselves. They could just as easily be used as the final two lines of the poem.
Nice poem.
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I think, like me ,you are very much into nature or the natural world and this shows in your writing. I particularly like the description of the bees. This reminds me of a lovely late spring day.
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