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Remember

        Remember, remember, the truth above lies.
  RemEmber, remember, the look in my eyes.
        My love for you will never fade away,
for thE love is too strong for words to say.
        Melodies of songs still ring in my ears,
those Blasted songs that bring back fears.
        Every cursed word is chased away,
  As I Rest in your smiling gaze.

        My eyes water as I think of how,
      wE almost broke our eternal vow.

  I am Forever ensnared within your heart,
    and Only you could pry me away,
      foR within your heart I want to stay.

  We wIll have our sacred night...

  Our Love will be displayed,
    in Only ways we will know.
        Vain are attemps to discover,
what Ever happened, beneath the covers.

        Yearning for what we have wanted then,
      nOw, it's time for a new beginning.
  Life Undone from the old dream.

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  • Beastial Wench
    November 29, 2006
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    Beautifully written my love and, as usual, a much needed read. Gorgeous, my dearest. It made me smile in more ways than one. Physically I smiled, mentally I grinned and emotionally I'm battling tears of happiness.

    I love you.

  • dreamer101
    November 29, 2006
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    'Mazing

    This poem was so beautiful and so creative and just awesome!! Amazing write!!! Go you


  • vibiesh
    November 29, 2006

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    'Love ' how fantastic it is, When ever we come under its spell we will have a magic feeling, Your poem have such a magic feeling in it. I always like to say that I liked this poem very much, well done Let your creation be heard by all
    With love
    Vibiesh Chungath Venugopal