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Colorless

In the dark you have no color
In the dark I am like you
When the lights are off
No prying eyes to wander
In the dark

A baby cries and mother answers
In the dark
Her white skin fades without light
His black skin absorbs the night

In the dark we are the same
Bonded for life by greater force
Than mere blood
An agreement in Heaven was made
I would be your mom and you would be my babe

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  • astralshepherd gold member
    December 9, 2006
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    yes

    this is a wonderful and well constructed expression of love and compassion and so timely as the we celebrate the birth of Another - you have explored the depths and come up with a jewel, a lovley poem to treasure. Blessings and best wishes, ~richard


  • moonspider
    November 29, 2006
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    wow!

    wow, some great feeling in here!
    i love it


  • esroddo silver member
    November 29, 2006
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    Wonderfully expressed

    Wow what a wonderful write with such feeling I loved it so much. I loved the concept you use color. (Lisa)
    "In the dark we are the same
    Bonded for life by greater force
    Than mere blood
    An agreement in Heaven was made
    I would be your mom and you would be my babe"