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Invisible Decomposition

 



Decrepit hands grasp with a frigid touch.

Blood covered nails splinter, franticly

clawing at concrete walls; fighting

to escape this self induced

delusion. Kidnapped by

man's laws; branded

insane, marked a

lost cause and

left to

rot.

.

.

.

Invisible ink scrawled out on magic

parchment defining society's

norm and alienating others.

Decomposing of dreams,

separating nations,

killing ideals

of harmony

for all of

human

kind.


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  • Kari gold member
    January 27, 2007
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    This was great! I loved it The best of luck to you in the contest.
    Kari


  • Erotik Rose silver member
    November 30, 2006

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    This was well scripted,

    Decomposing of dreams
    saparating nations
    killing ideas
    of harmony
    for all of
    human
    kind.

    that says it right there.


  • Blazing White Wolf
    November 29, 2006
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    thi is nice work with the form the words flow nicely together portaying one of many of society's ills well dont My lioness *hugg*
    Love,
    Master