Time drifts slowly, with
Hope inside of misty
Eyes from tears long cried.
Chances gone with each new breath,
Absent-minded, nothing left.
Narrow slits of shattered life and
Deepened scars that speak of strife.
Lapsing time just comes and goes, while
Ever more, the droplets flow. Mere
Shadows of what should have been,
Gone before it's all began. Fear not the
Love, this life that's void. Nor not the
One that's been destroyed. Embrace the
Warmth we all must know, till the final flicker of
The candle's glow.
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No words, only feelings
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Thanks hun, I understand that.
Storm
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Most excellent, Storm! You have an awesome way of expressing your thoughts and feelings! Wish I were able to express as well....
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Oh lord, how did I miss the comment, sorry about that.
Sandy, you have your wonderful expression in every piece you write. Always have from what I've seen. But thank you for the comment.
Storm
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really nice sweeti
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Thank you Melissa
Storm
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Awesome job. Keep that candle burning hun. Many emotions you have expressed that I can relate to. I wish you all the best, you deserve it. Jeannie
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Thanks hun, I appreciate everything you say and do for me. Your support and friendship means so very much to me.
Storm
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A well done acrostic, has a deep saddness that comes through. Very good rhyme scheme and loved the way you ended it. Great job, be well and be blessed.
Mouser
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Thanks hun, appreciate the comments. Just a little bit of thoughts running rampant in words.
Storm
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