She knew her master would be home soon. He had been working so hard lately, and she had not been the best slave. She knew just what he would want when he got home. She drew up a bath in the Jacuzzi tub, lit some candles and made sure that dinner was ready. She didn’t have to wait very long before she heard his car in the circle drive. She made sure that everything was just how he liked it and waited for him to come in the door.
He pulled into the drive hoping that he didn’t have to deal with anything. He had a rough day and all he wanted to do was relax. He didn’t want to have to talk to anyone or do anything.
When he walked through the door he couldn’t believe his eyes. There were candles everywhere. One plate was sitting on the table. There was a rib eye steak cooked perfectly, baked potato, salad, green beans, and a slice of his favorite pie. He looked around to see who had done all of this. That’s when he saw her, his slave, sitting on the floor next to the fireplace.
He walked over to her. She was sitting there in nothing but her leather thong and matching collar that he bought for her over a month ago. That is when he started working so much. Thinking about it he realized that he never got to see her in it. He had been neglecting her this whole time.
She knew he was there but she didn’t raise her head to him. If anything he saw it lower even more. He knew that he had been very snappy with her lately, that’s when he wasn’t ignoring her totally. She looked so beautiful. Her curly blonde hair was left down so that it was hiding her full breasts slightly. The reflection of the fire was bouncing off her tanned skin, making her almost glow.
He touched her chin gently raising her up to stand. He didn’t stop until she looked him in the eye. She knew by the gleam in his eyes that she had done a good job. Without saying a word she took his hand and led him to the master bedroom where she started to strip him.
First she unbuttoned his shirt, taking just enough time to rub her hands across his chest as she slid the shirt off of him. She loved the feel of his muscular chest under her fingertips, but tonight was about him, not her. Her hands lowered and worked the buckle on his belt. Loosening it she unbuttoned his pants. Dropping to her knees, she lowered his pants. She wanted to give him some pleasure before taking him to the master bath. She gently stroked him with one hand, while the other hand made its way up his thigh and around to his butt. She raised her eyes to him just before sliding her mouth over him. Hearing his deep moans made her smile. She knew that she had to stop and get him to the Jacuzzi that she had waiting before the water got cold.
Raising up again to him she took him by the hand and led him to the master bath. She led him to the bath and motioned for him to get in. She waited till he got settled before she got behind him and started rubbing his shoulders. He had trained her in how to massage him when he first became her Master. She quickly caught on to what he liked and didn’t like, after being punished a couple of times for not paying attention. She could feel him relaxing under her fingertips.
Suddenly he rose up and stepped out of the bath tub. It was so sudden that she was still on her knees when he turned to her. She thought that she had done something wrong and prepared to be punished. Instead her Master knelt down next to her. Without saying a word he lowered his head and kissed her. Grabbing her up in his arms he carried her to the bedroom. Laying her down on the bed he spoke softly in her ear. He went on to nuzzle her neck just above her collar, his hand settling on her breast. He loved the way her body reacted when he played with her nipples. She was already so aroused that she couldn’t hold in her moans anymore. Hearing her moaning for him almost drove him over the edge. He then ordered her over to the side of the bed. Holding on to her hips he brought her to the edge of the bed where he stood. He removed her thong, noticing that she had shaven it just the way that he taught her. He had to smile at how well trained she had become.
He placed her legs up on his shoulders to allow him the access to her that he needed. With his hands on each of her hips he lowered himself into her. She moaned with ecstasy, moving slowly against him. He could hardly control him self. He could feel her getting close as he raised her hips to allow him deeper access. She felt so wonderfully. He reached down and began to play with her nipples as he made love to her. That took her over the edge. He felt the shiver of heat spread through her body. He had felt this many times over the years and knew what it meant. Grabbing her breasts he thrust in her deep. She came so powerfully that a scream escaped her mouth. Her muscles almost convulsed from the release. At the same time she wrapped herself around him pulling him deeper into him causing him to cum with almost as much force as her.
Not ready to let her go he maneuvered her so that they were both able to lay on the bed wrapped up in each others arms without ever sliding out of her. That is how they slept. A Master and his slave, sleeping, forgetting all about the world around them for a moment.
A contest entry
- The Erotic Challenge Season 6 by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended March 27, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is so good, a tender moment between Master and slave and a well trained slave. You have written a wonderful piece I just love it.
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This is such an awesome story....I really enjoyed it and I wish that I could add another poet to the finalist because it would definately be this one..
This had punishment and love..very well mixed.
**Master Ktulu**
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Oh, how I wish I had one more person I could select for the challenge. How I wish I could do that!!!! This was beautiful. This was hot and intimate and wonderfully written. I loved every part of it. I get the punishment part so well, but I also get the love. I am so fortunate to know all about this love, as I am married to the man who guides and protects me through life. I know this will be chosen by one of the remaining judges. Wonderful piece.


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good job, it was great, and i enjoyed reading this, the details were great,
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wow... i really like this. it is erotic and shows the soft side of BDSM which you don't really get to read about much in stories. this is very good, and you painted a wonderful picture with your story. i'm glad i got to read it.
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Wow. The descriptions are great. Nice job, this is very erotic, in a pleasant way too

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Well dang girl, this should definitely make the 'battle' for you a little more interesting. Who wouldn't want you/that? Wow! Nice writing. Sure made a dent over here, lol.
Storm
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Ooo to think, a slave and her Master. It would be great roleplay, but I'd hope you wouldn't be "punished" for doing wrong. You'll make someone very happy though if you make them dinner everynight and sit in front of the fire in a leather thong for when they get home!

Good write,
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VERY HOT
MMMMMMMMMM nice, I liked this very much. This makes me want you even more. Nice erotic descriptions and wonderful imagery. I could feel every touch and hear every moan within your words. Very sexy and I especially liked the end, leaving it in while they slept. Thanks for sharing wicked, this will inspire me in the challenge.
Love yah,
CK

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i agree with my wife, whomever wins you will be a gateful man, you did a hot job on this, i mean wow, this got my blood pumping, keep it flowing hope to see more from you
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HOTTTTTTTTT
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm sis whomever gets you will be very very very VERY happy
Well done...the details are very arousing
I'm proud of you with this write and I am sooo glad you posted it

Kari

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Sultry
And what a thoughtful slave you will be.
Very nicely written.
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