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The Vows

I love you,
And I always will.

I honor you,
And I always will.
I cherish you,
And I always will.

You are God's precious gift to me,
An underserving man made glad.
You are the most precious to me,
A rare jewel given not just had.

I try to make you smile for me.
I try to make you always glad.
You make me smile not just for thee.
You make me laugh when I am sad.

I smile at you,
And I always will.
I cry with you,
And I always will.

I love you,
And I always will.

Author notes

Something inspired by my dearest love.

Was the rythm good? was I forcing the rhyming?

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  • November 29, 2006

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    I love it...you've managed to make me cry (in a good way) over multiple poems now. It's beautiful..

  • She Stole My Voice
    November 28, 2006

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    These would make wonderful wedding vows. Now I'm inspired to write some wedding vows! I really do love this piece though. And no, the rhyming doesn't seem too forced at all Keep up the killer work, take care, and keep on writing!

    ~ImmortalUndead~